Collide: Chapter 5, part two

[kyasuriin]

Title: Collide
Pairing: Remus/Sirius of Harry Potter fandom
Rating: NC-17 overall, this part is more like PG-13.
Summary (for all parts): AU (Remus never went to Hogwarts). Everytime Remus gets close to someone, they start to uncover the truth about his strange disappearances and injuries. He can't stand the look on their face when he tells them

Comments

[aquila_star]

OH.

oh.

wow. I am loving this more and more. For some reason I fell even more in love with Sirius this chapter. Lovely.

[vera_dicere]

ah. i so love your characterisations. i rather like the switch from the cliche of sirius being an utter ass all the time. he's such a doll! usually i'm a bit more partial to remus [must be the book fetish] but your sirius has utterly captured my heart- and remus' as well, from the look of things.

thanks for the update! splendid gift for the hols. looking forward to the next bit, and hoping there's something like this *points to icon* going on soonish. ^___________^

[hated_addiction]

Ahhhh! God, I love your Lily so much and hbjfdhk I am sooo happy you posted this before xmas, lifted me right out of my scroogey funk, it did.

Lyds
xx

[kyasuriin]

aww, yay *hugs* merry christmas & I'm glad you liked this part!

[marilla82]

Kat, where should I mail my first born? You've earned him/her!

*squishes*

[ekaterin24]

You continue to write this so *perfectly*! Lily's reaction is an excellent blend of appropriate reproach/warnings to Remus and understanding and concern for him. And we are not to forget she's up to her eyeballs in wedding plans as well so she's showing uncommonly excellent presence of mind and judgment.

I forsee Remus approaching Sirius at the wedding to try to reconnect and things being one sort or another of interesting.

::happy long sigh:: This is soooooo excellent wonderful and perfect, Kat! Thank you!

[kyasuriin]

ahh, thank so much! I was so worried that she would be too reproachful or too understanding and actually had a friend read it over to make sure it was okay. So it's so nice hearing that from you as well :)

heheh, she is extremly together for having a wedding in less than a week. I'm going to pass that off as her being very well prepared *g* (because I imagine weddings in the wizarding world would be even more work to plan than weddings in the 'muggle' world).

& the wedding should be interesting and fun to write at that, especially if it goes how I think it's going to go in my head (which doesn't always happen!)

Thanks so much for your comments - they warm my little heart ♥