Fic: Pain drabble

[kathiann]

Title: Pain
Rating: T
Summery: She didn't think it would end like this.
Authors note: A drabble written for the December 2013 week 1 challenge over at brigits_flame prompt "feelings". Not tied to any fandom.

Comments

[lacombe]

I like how the burning boat gives distance and depth to the drabble by implying that this is a turning point, yet it also works as a metaphor. It's one thing to burn a bridge and lose a single option, but you lose options in spades when a boat is burned to ashes.

[kathiann]

Thank you so much for reading and for your kind comments. I really appreciate it.