Free write

[katrina85]

I feel suffocated. Nauseated. Medicated. That which was real is now lost to a sea of pop pop popping kernels. I’m watching you watching it watching. Watching. Watching the time go by. Flying fast past my darting eyes. Darting back and forth. Forth and back. Ping pong was never so interesting. Entertaining. Mesmerizing. Hypnotizing. All the -ings.

Comments

[obtrectation]

I think this is the best I've ever seen you write. I really enjoyed it. ^_^

[katrina85]

Someday I would like to read this at a poetry slam. It's has that sort of rhythm I imagined when I wrote it. I'm glad you liked it.

[katrina85]

By the way, when I wrote the mesmerizing part I thought of you and I had to smile. ^_^ Just thought you should know.

[obtrectation]

I think of you and smile in response to a lot. ^_^

[mysticdrache]

I think it's very interesting, you should post more of your writings.

[katrina85]

I'm usually really protective of my writing. I don't know why this one was an exception. I guess I liked it because of the way it flowed. I'll think about posting more from now on though. ^_^

[halo_dork]

It seems like a well thought out writing. When I start to read something and I get lost thinking about what song lyrics it sounds like then I know its good ^_^'

[katrina85]

Actually it wasn't well thought out at all. I'd say it took me about 7 minutes total... or something like that. ^_^ It was actually really fun. Thank you for the compliment though. Did you figure out what song lyrics it sounded like?

[moonbubble1]

That was absolutely beautiful.