new story I just wrote

Aug 03, 2005 23:57


A/N The name of the song is Cold September by Fiona Apple and I own nothing of course.

Pale September, I wore the time like a dress that year.
The autumn days swung soft around me, like cotton on my skin.

She lay awake, staring out the window at the glowing opal in the sky. It wasn’t full, not yet, but tomorrow night it would be. This time ( Read more... )

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i_said_boourns August 3 2005, 21:15:35 UTC
This was very, very sweet. I liked it a lot. :)

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sparkly_stuff August 3 2005, 23:37:54 UTC
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

So lovely!

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verdantdruid August 4 2005, 00:10:45 UTC
very pretty
makes me feel lonely

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thanks katrushkalupin August 4 2005, 18:23:30 UTC
Hey there Danny boy. Thabks for the review Love, Addy

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everknowledge August 4 2005, 07:00:50 UTC
How very sweet. Thanks for sharing!

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trypnoticmelody August 4 2005, 07:53:23 UTC
you're such a great writer.

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falcon_z August 4 2005, 10:15:21 UTC
Another reason why Remus and I are alike; I consciously or uncosciously create these worlds and stories in my sleep, dreams that in the end either strike me as odd or scare me shitless.

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falcon_z August 4 2005, 10:16:00 UTC
Oh, yes, forgot to say what A wonderful writer you are, better than any attempt I've ever made.

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