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katrushkalupin

Chapter 2

Apr 05, 2010 23:18

Chapter 2

Guy awoke with the sun. Even as he pushed himself up and out of the bed he knew that everything was different. A glanced to his left showed that Marian was no longer beside him. He remembered her tears the night before, the way that she had curled into herself away from his touch. He had not hurt her. He knew that he had not. She ( Read more... )

romance, katrushkalupin, fanfic, robinhoodbbc, nc-17, au, guy/ marian, what time has told

Comments 16

lady_t_220 April 6 2010, 11:39:43 UTC

Oh dear, I do hope Robin isn't going to plan to try something rash, like rendering Marian a respectable widow in order to get her out of her marriage. And I do hope Guy can find some way to persuade Marian that he's not as bad as she thinks.

katrushkalupin April 6 2010, 15:10:52 UTC

Weeell.... sort of.
But we'll have our happy ending I promise!

cila81 April 6 2010, 16:10:54 UTC

That was a great chapter! Looking forward to more :)

katrushkalupin April 6 2010, 22:26:28 UTC

Thanks!!

YAY! anonymous April 6 2010, 18:08:03 UTC

Thank you for the update! Another lovely chapter. Those two are so stubborn! Definitely looking forward to more of their interactions in the castle!!! Is PJ coming? Well, I guess that I'll just have to wait and see :) Oh! And will Robin ever find out that Richard put Vasey in charge? What a stir that would cause...

Re: YAY! katrushkalupin April 6 2010, 22:25:52 UTC

Thanks for the review!! The two of them have a long road ahead of them. It's gonna be ugly, I won't lie.

shezan April 7 2010, 02:29:53 UTC

Nicely drawn! I can see this will (deliciously) take time!

twinkling_moon April 7 2010, 05:33:10 UTC

Was so excited to see you had updated! Good stuff! I like how we gained some insight into Guy's thought processes. I kinda feel bad for the poor guy. Really interesting twist about the King putting Vasey in charge. Can't wait to see how this all unfolds.

Also, is the whole stabbing thing while Marian was the NW suppose to happen in this version of events? I'm just wondering about her scar and has Guy noticed it?

Anyhow, looking forward to reading the rest! Keep it coming!

katrushkalupin April 7 2010, 06:39:38 UTC

Oh yeah the scar is totally there!! lol, but no he hasn't noticed it yet, he hasn't really seen the front of her naked if you recall...
But he will notice eventually and he will not be terribly excited about it.
Thanks sooo much for staying with me!!

twinkling_moon April 8 2010, 02:56:30 UTC

Yeah, I did remember that he didn't exactly look at her from the front, but I thought maybe he felt it? Or maybe she was still in some discomfort and he would have noticed her reaction, after all, didn't the wedding take place only a day after the stabbing? then again, they did seem to have other things on their mind, hee! hee!

No big deal though. I'm glad you are going to address that storyline. Lord knows the BBC writers are awesome at ignoring inconvenient parts of the story when it suits them :)