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katrushkalupin

Chapter 3

May 25, 2010 00:41

Chapter 3

Guy had been run beyond ragged by the time Marian arrived. He didn’t have the energy to fight or spar with her. She had taken her sweet time as he’d assumed she would, just to be contrary. He had watched her arrive on her horse with the carriage behind her and congratulated himself on the foresight to avoid her. He loved ( Read more... )

romance, guy/ marian, what time has told

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applebeing May 25 2010, 10:01:30 UTC

Eventually his eyes opened and he frowned in confusion as he took it from her.

“It is not black.” He commented, inspecting it.

I am still laughing.

katrushkalupin May 25 2010, 13:07:34 UTC

Lol, i couldn't let the rest of you have all the fun, i had to put it in there.

01cheers May 25 2010, 15:58:48 UTC

It is oddly enjoyable to watch these two bickering as a married couple; quite a change from the show's chasing-Marian routine. And Vasey's scheming looks quite promising.

katrushkalupin June 1 2010, 23:26:40 UTC

It's the devil isn't it? he he he. Yeah I was sick of watching him be the gullible dope while she ran circles around him. Thanks for the review!

shezan May 25 2010, 16:37:57 UTC

I love the way this develops. She is making his life miserable!

shezan May 25 2010, 18:00:59 UTC

He was quickly learning that life with Marian required four contingencies: the expected, the unexpected, the hoped for and the undesired; all had to be planned for to avoid disappointment or surprise.

WONDERFULLY put!

katrushkalupin June 1 2010, 23:27:47 UTC

I was quite proud of that stroke of genius myself. She's a fickle crazy mistress isn't she? THanks for sticking with me!

Fan-bloody-tastic!!! anonymous May 25 2010, 21:18:20 UTC

Thank you, thank you, thank you for another update! Brilliantly expressed! The four contingences: genius, not to mention the black comment and the explanation of his caring for her. Fantastic. I love the premise for this story and how you write it. It makes a change from the usual angst and I've yet to read one from right after S1 where they did get on and married. Silly Marian turning up her nose and dear Guy! And poor Guy, so tired and accepting. She'll come around eventually. Thank goodness she is not entirely without heart and has noticed his weariness. There is hope! ;)

Re: Fan-bloody-tastic!!! katrushkalupin May 26 2010, 17:58:28 UTC

*blushes*. Awwww thank you sooo much!

Re: Fan-bloody-tastic!!! scarletrose13 May 26 2010, 21:57:10 UTC

More please :) So far Ive liked all the chapters. I can imagine him in blue. lol

Re: Fan-bloody-tastic!!! katrushkalupin June 1 2010, 23:28:44 UTC

It's a delicious mental image isn't it? ; ) Thanks for reviewing!