I haven't been able to comment for the past week [probably when you needed it most] because I haven't been at home and these people that I'm staying with can sense the slightest sound of the damn keyboard
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if you really want someone to act as a critic for you honestly you should've just asked. I do a lot of writing myself so I know what you are talking about, and you will never really gain any satisfaction in writing unless it gets on the big screen. But if you want a critic just ask and I'll give you a short sentance to a whole full blown thing if you want. Don't count your assets out without using them first.
I suppose I never concidered the Live Journal thing to be a place to show off one's writing talents. I am no writter, but I am a story teller. Ask me to read somthing, and ask for an opnninion, and I will give it to you. Ask for me to be critical and I will be.
But I'm not the sort of person to read a journal, and judge the writing abilities of a person.
This is your latest entry, and I remembered a bit too late that I don't have your phone number.anigirl15September 4 2005, 02:56:50 UTC
muddledXmind69: If you're on later could you please tell Kes that Steve loves and misses her, ir please call her? KBB08: ok... KBB08: sure muddledXmind69: Thanks, sorry it's just you're the only person that knows us both... Thanks^^ KBB08: sure no prob muddledXmind69: Night Night^^ muddledXmind69 signed off at 10:40:51 PM.
I like what you write. You do it well. I never say anything cause typing is hard. But, you know, you aren't perfect. If you go back, however, and look at your entries in order, yeah, compare. You'll find what you like.
Also, you suck. I have the balls to say it. Please don't take them.
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But I'm not the sort of person to read a journal, and judge the writing abilities of a person.
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KBB08: ok...
KBB08: sure
muddledXmind69: Thanks, sorry it's just you're the only person that knows us both... Thanks^^
KBB08: sure no prob
muddledXmind69: Night Night^^
muddledXmind69 signed off at 10:40:51 PM.
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Also, you suck. I have the balls to say it. Please don't take them.
:)
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