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kaybee38

Ortus 2.2/? (Ignis sidestory)

Feb 28, 2011 23:41

Title: Ortus/Chapter 2.2 - "Disturbed" Pt.2
Author: kaybee38
Rating: PG
Characters: Minho (and a bunch of other people, pay attention!)
Genre: reailty-based fantasy, sci-fi
Disclaimer: SHINee, f(x), DBSK, and S.M. the Ballad are owned by SM Entertainment only. Big Bang is owned by YG Entertainment. BEAST is owned by Cube Entertainment.
Summary: This is ( Read more... )

kaybee38, micky, !fic:ortus, seungri, yoochun, minho, sci-fi, yuri, changmin, yoseob, !fic: ignis

Comments 26

EXCITEEEEDDD!!! fadedandinsane March 1 2011, 04:41:54 UTC

calling a spot. brb. really.

Re: EXCITEEEEDDD!!! kaybee38 March 1 2011, 04:49:49 UTC

u lil NINJA! I literally just posted!

Re: EXCITEEEEDDD!!! fadedandinsane March 1 2011, 04:51:26 UTC

i guess i was just lucky? idk i just had this really really really weird feeling that i should check if you had updated. reading at the moment :DDDD

omg... jino!!!

Re: EXCITEEEEDDD!!! fadedandinsane March 1 2011, 05:34:59 UTC

yoochunnie, changminnie, krystal, sengri.... awwww... my biases :D
i love how they helped him escape, and bb!jinho is so adorbs.
and how minho realizes he can control other people's thoughts....
and how minho meets yuri...

*loves on this chapter bunches :DDDD

♥

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kaybee38 March 1 2011, 04:45:24 UTC

spot for stjoan4eva

stjoan4eva March 2 2011, 05:13:46 UTC

You really are masterful. The way you set up the scenes and the action, I could feel my heart racing along with the characters, and the way you introduced the other kids at the asylum was neither too brief or too over the top. Perfection, I mean it.

I love watching how you magically get better and better and better with each story you right, and I'm already chomping at the bit for the next story! <333333 *flail*

kaybee38 March 2 2011, 16:41:12 UTC

Aww thanks Tiff! that really is a compliment coming from you! I'm glad you liked it. It was actually longer, and I had written out several of the other kid's stories in this, but in the end, I realized that they were making the plot drag a bit. I'm glad you still see them and care about them though. THANK YOU! *glomps*

kaybee38 March 1 2011, 04:45:46 UTC

spot for kinnosuikazura

kyttenfae March 1 2011, 13:13:17 UTC

READ, FLAILED, POSSIBLY CRIED, FLAILED SOME MORE AND DEAR GOD IT'S FIVE AM SO I AM GOING TO SLEEP BUT NEVER APOLOGISE FOR WRITING LONG STUFF CAUSE YOU ARE SHINY! <33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333

kaybee38 March 1 2011, 15:42:41 UTC

OMG Jenn I hope you got some sleep! I'm glad you liked it, I had to put an APB out on my muse, but I found him. Whew! One day, I'll learn to write a drabble. (yeah, right).

kaybee38 March 1 2011, 04:46:11 UTC

spot for eijifujiryoma

kaybee38 March 1 2011, 04:47:06 UTC

spot formoonstarchild