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kayden_eidyak

Gilligan's Problem

Nov 05, 2009 23:33

Week one entry for brigits_flame
Prompt: China
800 words

Gilligan's Problem
by Kayden Eidyak

It was with some trepidation that Gilligan the bull rapped (perhaps harder-than-necessary) on the door labeled: Marjorie Crane, Psychologist.

"Come in," came a reedy voice in answer to his knock.

Gilligan entered the room, twisting his front hooves nervously as he glanced at ( Read more... )

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kayden_eidyak November 6 2009, 13:58:25 UTC

Yessss. It did quite...er...go as originally planned. :-/

shashigai November 8 2009, 15:52:38 UTC

I really like the idea of therapizing a bull in a china shop...

kayden_eidyak November 8 2009, 18:11:04 UTC

Thank you. It didn't go quite as planned, but whatcha gonna do. :)

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kayden_eidyak November 8 2009, 18:11:53 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

pauljoy November 8 2009, 18:21:43 UTC

This story is so cute! I love stories like these; it is so different from what we usually read. Lovely idea :)

kayden_eidyak November 8 2009, 18:38:53 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

vyvyan_wilde November 9 2009, 02:27:47 UTC

Haha, aw.
The poor hapless bull XD

Sweet story ^^

kayden_eidyak November 11 2009, 03:27:07 UTC

Thanks!