Boys Want Everything - Chapter 4

[kayson135]

Boys Want Everything - Chapter 4
Rating: Pg-13 this chapter due to swearing

All the same information from previous chapters apply. I can't believe how long it took me to finish it. I'm never moving houses again if I can help it.

Comments

[owensheart]

Great chapter, These boys, and Why do I think Arthur might be hiding the fact he is gay from Merlin too.

[kayson135]

Hmm maybe Arthur's a little insecure? :P Thanks for reading! Your comment made me smile :)

[arthurmerlin]

Wonderful chapter! I really feel for Arthur and Merlin in this story; it's one of those rare stories which actually has me talking to my computer! "come on, Gwaine, just say what you want to say!" ; "tell him, Merlin!" etc etc.

I love it! I can't wait for the next part, actually I must confess to refreshing the page every few minutes now I've read this chapter in the hope there'll be another one! I'm addicted :-)

[kayson135]

First, I must tell you that your comment made me grin like a loony. I'm so happy that you love it!!!! I promise to have another chapter soon. I just need to iron out the kinks (no pun intended). :P

As for Gwaine, I think he's quite amused by the whole thing and Merlin's just a little bit naive, or perhaps a little silly. Poor boys. Thank you for your comment! It really did completely make my day!

[archaeologist_d]

I liked how Merlin was rather confused about Arthur and what his role was there. It sounds like Gwaine at least thought A/M were a couple, not just friends.

[kayson135]

Oh yes, Merlin was terribly confused. He's quite oblivious, isn't he? The poor dear. Heehee. I'm glad you like it!!

[hellusbellus]

Well done with this chapter! Some classic misunderstandings to make everybody nice and confused about their relationships, haha. I'm eager to see how it all plays out.

[kayson135]

Thank you! I'm so happy you liked it. The boys are definitely a tad bit silly.

[sp_owl]

I'm really enjoying this. I hate to make more work for you, but do you think it would be possible to have a small summary at the beginning of each installment? I'm not sure about other people, but I tend to forget what's going on.
I liked how cool Merlin was when he walked in on Arthur undressed. Nice change from the flustered Merlin we normally see in stories. I like Gwaine, too. I like the idea of this slumber party!

[kayson135]

I'm sorry! I'll definitely try putting a summary in front of the next chapter. Do you mean like a two or three sentence recap? I think I can do that :)

I'm glad you're liking the story! I hope that you enjoy the next chapter too. It's so much fun writing these boys! Thank you for your sweet comment. It made me so happy.

[sp_owl]

Yes, just a brief summary of what's going on. I don't know if it's just me, but I read other stories that are continuing like this one, and I find myself forgetting exactly what's going on.
Looking forward to the next one!

[kayson135]

OK no problem! I can definitely relate. Sorry to cause confusion :( I will put a little summary before the next chapter. I'm glad you like it!!