btw, that bit near the end that made no sense? That was me messing around with a sentence my beta didn't like and then accidently deleting some other line completely *headdesk* fixed now.
Suddenly a confused expression crossed Moneypenny’s face and she knelt up and straddled a dismayed-looking Johnson. Eddie realised what was about to happened and grimaced in distaste, blinking rapidly to dispel the vision.
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*shiver*
(Poor Eddie, never knew what hit him!)
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btw, that bit near the end that made no sense? That was me messing around with a sentence my beta didn't like and then accidently deleting some other line completely *headdesk* fixed now.
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(BTW, this sentence:
Suddenly a confused expression crossed Moneypenny’s face and she knelt up and straddled a dismayed-looking Johnson. Eddie realised what was about to happened and grimaced in distaste, blinking rapidly to dispel the vision.
about to happen
:)
Hope you don't mind me pointing that out.)
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-Rhonda
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Now that I've been reminded I'll finish it hopefully within the week. I only have two parts left to write, how hard can it be? *looks shifty*
(sorry I couldn't respond before I was totally foccussed on Yuletide deadlines and if I started thinking about KE I'd want to write that instead *G*)
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