How's My Driving

[lord_admin]

How's My Driving?

How this works: Post your characters' names and journals. Hop around to others' threads and offer praise or constructive criticism where appropriate. Receive praise or con-crit in return. If offering crit, please make sure to be civil.

Participation isn't compulsory, but it's recommended all the same.

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Brynhildr Dottir // OC

[brynkitten]

Re: Brynhildr Dottir // OC

[likesfootnotes]

Is there any particular angle of Bryn that you want crit for?

[brynkitten]

I'm pretty happy with how things have been going with her, with the exception of my lack of tagging lately...

The only thing I've been kinda wondering is if it seems like her growth is all still...logically in-line? :|a I've been kinda doing a slow build-up with her and changes the last several months...and last time I thought I had her at a new growth point I think I backslid again but...idk if perhaps that was just the particular situation she was in or what...

...and I can't for the life of me remember when this point was or what point in particular was the backsliding. ~_~

But if you've noticed anything on that subject I'd be happy to hear. <3

[likesfootnotes]

Is the lack of tagging just general demotivation accross the board?

Sparky's Brood

[knife_envy]

tomb_raiding :: Tomb Raider
knife_envy :: X-Men movie-verse
lucky_breath :: Radiant Historia
madteos :: Original Character

LOGAN

[likesfootnotes]

The thread that Logan had with Rapunzel about the evils of Santa is a great example of his character. I think you've got the voice quite strongly.

Re: LOGAN

[madteos]

Thank you! That's really very reassuring to hear. Logan is one of the muses I worry about the most, so I'm very very glad to hear that I'm handling him right.

[consumeraddict]

Sollux Captor | Homestuck | thii2ii22tupiid
Jacob Corvus | OC | icnfly

SOLLUX

[likesfootnotes]

Disclaimer: Completely canonblind.

One thing I'll say is that I hate Homestuck with a passion, but I really love tagging with Sollux. You are true to the character (as I understand it).

More than anything, the fact that you consistently tag back makes you a strong player in general. Even when you are not feeling it, you've been tagging me back when I get up the energy to tag.

Re: SOLLUX

[consumeraddict]

homestuck can certainly inspire that ^^;
but thank you.

and we try, sometimes not so good at tags but as long as we have time for them we figure should at least put out a few

CRIT MY POSSE

[lightyourway]

Kairi | lightyourway | Kingdom Hearts

Toph Bei Fong | rocklikerunaway | Avatar: the Last Airbender

Nieta Diegues | vivenieta | Original Character

Isabel Galstone | aegisofsilk | Original Character

TOPH

[likesfootnotes]

I hear her solidly in her tags. The thread with Starscream in her latest post is a great example of this; I loved her reaction to the idea of someone made entirely of metal. Another strong thread is the one with Rem in the previous post.

I really enjoy your Toph, though I have not yet taken the opportunity to tag her. This I shall amend hence!

KAIRI

[likesfootnotes]

One thing I appreciate about the way you play in general is your persistence in backtagging. We've had a thread going since, what... October? And Kairi has been very consistent in it, reacting (in what I feel is) an IC manner to each new stimulus that Bartimaeus throws at her.

She also seems to have a good variety of cr, which is an important detail that I'm glad to see - Kairi is a friendly girl, but you're not writing her vapidly. I enjoy her very much.

[missmimmi]

missmimmi

thenotmagician

abstinentzombie

ZEKE

[likesfootnotes]

Your Zeke is very consistent and true to the character as I understand it. I haven't followed his role in plots and I am sad that I got too busy to do much with him around Christmas. :'(

Re: ZEKE

[missmimmi]

ITS K BB

because zeke never stops cooking and giving away food |D