[one-shot] WATER DANCE

[keitaru]

Summary: There is a lake in a forest. It is the center of every hero’s dream; a place of insanity and obsession. Many have disappeared, whispered to never return. But in that place is someone waiting for the final reincarnation to begin, and the water dance to finish, after the long centuries.

Disclaimer: I am not Johnny. I don't own anything,

Comments

[aki_bubu]

it's too touching....
i like the way you present it...
from there past till current and their love never end...
just like the old times fairy tales...
good job and thanks for sharing...

[keitaru]

Thank you for reading. I'm glad that you didn't think this was pure fail.
Honestly, I wasn't sure about the reactions it would bring, but...
Well, thanks for reading.

[snow_guardian]

this was beutifully written, it brought tears to my eyes... i'm lost with words to describe how beautiful this was... thank you so much for sharing! JUNDA LOVE!!!!!! <3

[keitaru]

Thanks for reading.
I'm glad you thought this one-shot was touching. (I'm not that sure about my writing.)
I wanted to show the different bonds of loyalty through this fic, and I'm overjoyed to see that I didn't fail at that.
JunDa=Pure Love
Literally.

Gööd

[tatsuya_bocchan]

Whaaat!?
Why???
Junjun died... Huhuhu
Not kind of happily ever after story...
Well, it still beautiful anyway.
I love how u describe tatchan looks.. Mysterious adorable fairy, And beautiful, And soft, And..
Lolz..
'i see fairy' quote is back rite XD
And the old pair is back!
*fully joy XD*
Know what, i just imagine a fairy wears a pair of boxer gloves. Lolz..
*idiot!!*

JunDa always my number one pairing ever XD
Yey!! Banzai XD
Thank you for sharing

Re: Gööd

[keitaru]

:D Thanks for reading.
Yeah, the famous "I see faries" line was a big influence on this.
Boxing gloves... I can imagine that.
Hur hur hur... Maybe I'm just a sadist for killing them off. *brick'd*

Re: Gööd

[tatsuya_bocchan]

Sadist? Lolz, means ur S haha, but it's very natural like that, die, and they'll go for another live. Rite XD

And it will be very different story, both of them will be brothers in next live if it in my S imagination. Lolz..
God, i wish i can write fic in english, but like u see, my english sucks..

Zannen desu ne..

[haaaana]

Ooh, I just realized that text messaging is really not the only way to communicate. DDD: *smacksself* I'm such an idiot. Anyways~ YAY FOR JUNDA~~~~!!!! <333333 Yesyesyes~ I like how you used the taboo part of their relationship, because well, yeah.

...Ok, Ueda didn't die this time at least.

BUT WHY!!??!?!?? Nyooo~~~~ Taguchi~~~ TT____________TT I really started crying when Junno died. D:

Oh, and songs are great sources of inspiration, aren't they?

At least they got to enjoy some happy times together... although I'm confused a bit. Did they break the reincarnation curse? :(

Oh, and I have to get off. DDD: Comment more later~~~

[keitaru]

Should I write a sequel?

[tatsuya_bocchan]

Yeah! U sould!!

[keitaru]

Okay then. *wanders off to think*