kingdom hearts: wham! bam! thank you! gay!

[keldjinfae_moon]

Title: Wham! Bam! Thank You! Gay! (No, really)
Author: kel_fish
Fandom: Kingdom Hearts
Pairing: Riku/Sora
Rating: T
Disclaimer: Kingdom Hearts belongs to SquareEnix, Disney, and others who aren’t I.
Author's Note: This bit of silliness was written for obstinate_fate's birthday, and came into being after a simple discussion with suddenchangeofh about when not to use exclamation points

Comments

[obstinate_fate]

Oh my God, this is an amazing gift. Thank you so much. ;_; I haven't been entirely articulate of my own behalf lately, so I feel like this review is going to suck majorly. Just know that I thoroughly fucking enjoyed this--and even if Riku gives you problems and won't have an epiphany, just like all the other fuck-ups that get you stuck when you're writing, the stuff you manage to crank it out is always just as clever and heart-warming as always, smooth and creative, and written so well, with that bit of subtle sarcasm and witty plays on word and structure that you are so lucky to have naturally

[obstinate_fate]

Oh, right--and our little "!" discussions, you managed to make it into something so perfectly and professionally crackish. I love it. We should have those conversations more often.

[kel_fish]

The best step to making it happen is to do it. !!!

CONVERSE!!! And I meant the ACTION! NOT! The SHOES! Regardless of the fact that they! Are deserving! Of their own! Exclamation! Point! As well!

[kel_fish]

...Softness noted. *snickers* Seriously though, thank you. Hmm, this comment is lacking in sarcasm.

I'm sure it is. Cock. Er... Rooster.

[finem]

loved and laughed and dude...I miss these kids so much. Or rather, I miss reading the stuff that other people write about them...because I totally have my own little RiSo project piecing itself together. But that's just not the same as seeing someone else do it, y'know?

Anyway, this is awesome. 'nuff said ;)

[kel_fish]

No, I know what you mean; it happens so rarely these days and it's sad and... lonely. You don't really need to worry about me though, I'm not likely to stop writing RiSo anytime soon, if ever, as it's been my one tried and true OTP throughout... well, everything. Actually, I have two more hopefuls to be posted sometime before September. Which is amazing, since I haven't written anything on my own since last September.

[waterbaby12us]

Wow, that was utterly adorable! I love Riku's 'Sora's shorts is mine' comment, totally cracked me up =P

[kel_fish]

Thank you! Riku strikes me as the type who bottles his emotions inside until they explode, then everyone just sort of stares and wonders where the hell his attitude came from, so... Sora's shorts was only a matter of time.

[ryuujidiceboy]

Oh, this was awesome~. Riku was priceless in this~. The humor was very well done in this~. Also, I love the title~. Lovely job~!

[kel_fish]

Thank you very much! Heh, this is generally how I write Riku all the time, driving himself crazy with inner-monologue until he explodes and unleashes his insanity verbally and leaves everyone confused in his wake.

The title was a combination of an anti-exclamation point discussion and me coming up with the worst title ever and then being told by friends to turn it into a story. So... you may love it because it's sarcastic.

[mistyeyedreamer]

Gah, I really need to stop leaving tabs open for days without commenting on them Dx

This was great. Awesome and funny, and for some reason I think my favorite bit was when Sora offered to Curaga Riku. Maybe because it took the somewhat mundane setting of the baseball game, and then connected it back to how, oh yeah, they might be back on the islands, but they still went through all that. And so it's like they've got that deeper connection.

...I have no idea if you were actually going for that, but...um...yeah 8D

[kel_fish]

Yes, you do. lol

Thank you, and I usually do something like that in every KH fanfic I write, unless there is a credible reason to make it AU (i.e. Freaks and Fools or Commentary).