Make My Heart a Better Place (Part 5)

Aug 22, 2009 16:31

Make My Heart a Better Place
Part 5 of ???
Pairing: Godric/Eric
Warnings: Slash, Some Fluff,  May Get a Little Dark Eventually (my work sometimes does), and the fact that I'm going to take quite a few liberties with Godric and Eric's respective histories.  Fair Warning
Disclaimer:  They're not mine.  If they were?  Canon would say that Godric is still ( Read more... )

slash, godric, make my heart a better place, fanfiction, eric

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ohioala19 August 22 2009, 22:06:26 UTC
This was so beautifully written, it was worth waiting for for sure! I loved your description of Godric through Eric's POV about being a survivor and for someone to look so young but live for so long would actually be extremely tough and I love Eric being protective and Godric feeling angry at himself for losing control, poor guy is trying to hold it together, oh and I love Eric's pov the best I think, he's awesome, great work as usual!

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keenoled August 22 2009, 22:09:02 UTC
Awesome. :)

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keenoled August 23 2009, 08:58:46 UTC
And also, I frigging LOVE the little scenes bringing in outside characters, the guy with the camera, the teen at the mall. Mmmmm.

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kellyj63081 August 23 2009, 16:54:32 UTC
No one lives in a vacuum, and little human interactions are always fun. :D Thank ya.

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yumelover August 22 2009, 22:23:38 UTC
oh Godric we still love you whether your as passive as a mouse or as ruthless as a lion. Thank you for sharing made my day

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srmarybadass August 23 2009, 02:12:39 UTC
OH PAM. lulz.

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septemberoses August 23 2009, 02:45:12 UTC
Nooooooooooo!!!! Don't let anything happen to Eric or Godric!

Also, Godric's new outfit sounds hot. Also, maybe he should take up yoga? Meditation? Poor guy.

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