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kellysparrow

{ Alex/Richard, when you were the only thing that was real, g }

Feb 14, 2009 00:09

Title; When you were the only thing that was real
Pairing; Alex/Richard
Rating; g (pg at most)
Words; 2,861
Summary; A tale of Alex and Richard...
Disclaimer; I do not own them, I just like playing with them.
A/N; This is my first Alex/Richard, feedback is always greatly appreciated!

( His eyes were distracting. They were too deep, she always got lost and had trouble finding her way out again. )

alex/richard, fic: lost

Comments 8

bebitched February 15 2009, 01:07:43 UTC

This was beautiful. It really brought a new side to these two, especially Richard. I love this idea that Alex has some kind of power, because it totally makes sense in the context of Lost. Great work!

kellysparrow February 15 2009, 15:53:10 UTC

Thank you very much!

It took me a while to write this and I turned out entirely different from I thought it would be, so I'm glad you liked it! :D

I'm hoping to see more of Richard soon :D

_noa February 16 2009, 17:08:12 UTC

I like the direction you took for this story, it surprised me too as I thought you'd go somewhere different with them. I never really thought of Alex or Richard as full characters before, so you really brought them to life with this fic :)

kellysparrow February 17 2009, 14:15:43 UTC

Thank you very much. It really wasn't my intention of taking this turn, but it would have been awkward at the end to make it into ~porn~. I didn't think it fit in this story. I'll write more of them, as soon as I've got time to work on the idea that's in my head. And when I find some time to write xD

made_in_ink February 17 2009, 20:29:19 UTC

I'm in love with your watchful Richard!

I love how Richard gave Alex the present of company by bringing Karl to her and also how he was behind the famous slingshot!

This was excellently executed! I love it :) I hope you write more soon.

kellysparrow February 17 2009, 21:05:43 UTC

Wow! Thank you very much! The slingshot was just a small thing, but I thought it might be fitting and I'm glad you liked it too!

I just finished writing another one, a lot shorter than this one though :)

elliotsmelliot February 18 2009, 20:23:19 UTC

Ooh, this was so creepy! It makes a lot of sense for Alex to be watched and tested in the same ways as John and Walt. You also really captured Richard's elusive nature, neither here, nor there, but always around. I also liked the image of the island being reborn after the rain, much like Alex leaving the barracks.

kellysparrow February 18 2009, 21:40:56 UTC

I actually started something different, but the tests suddenly came to mind and it wouldn't even be that far-fetched for them to test Alex too. (I still don't know exactly what they've done to Walt and I'd very much like to know.)

I'm glad you thought my Richard was good! It's good to hear this, I haven't been writing him for long and even though I really love him and he's a challenge to write, fact remains that we don't know a lot about him and that's just his character, so I don't want to mention too much but not too little either.

Thank you for reading and I'm glad you liked!