Comments | kellysparrow: { Alex/Richard; The home that is in all of our hearts }

kellysparrow

{ Alex/Richard; The home that is in all of our hearts }

Feb 17, 2009 20:46

Title; The home that is in all of our hearts
Pairing; Alex/Richard
Rating; pg
Words; 617
Summary; Alex turns twenty-one and it's time for to leave the island for the first time ever.
Disclaimer; I do not own them, I just like playing with them.
A/N; Enjoy and feedback is always appreciated.
Prequel to Interlude in Los Angeles

( Arms outstretched, palms flat against the ground, she felt the soil beneath her fingers. )

alex/richard, fic: lost

Comments 6

made_in_ink February 17 2009, 20:57:00 UTC

I'm loving this hard.

I love the way the interaction between them seems so comfortable, you can almost see the old married couple they might become and the kid's they might have (perhaps she will conceive off island). Their understated actions exude warmth and the sense of their belonging. You have managed to capture the essence of their relationship in so few lines! ♥

kellysparrow February 17 2009, 21:11:20 UTC

Thank you! :)

I'm glad it came across pretty much how I inteded it! It's always a challenge trying to show a lot with not a lot of words and I'm glad you thought I succeeded. It's definitely a shame we won't see more of them together on the show.

motorcyclesfly February 17 2009, 20:58:24 UTC

This was gorgeous! I love it! Richard and Alex shoudn't work, but somehow does, the way you write it. There was no compromise on either personality, yet they fit together perfectly. Great work! Off to read some of your other writings. :)

kellysparrow February 17 2009, 21:13:59 UTC

Thank you very much! I have to admit that I intended on writing nc-17 fic about these two, but they managed to stop me from doing that and gave me two normal-rated fics. I'm happy with how they turned out and I'm glad you liked this one. It's very hard to write few words, but say a lot.

Thanks again! :D I'm happy you like it.

I'm curious what the writers have to tell about Richard, because there is a lot we don't know about him (yet that's also the things that attracts me) and I'm really curious :)

elliotsmelliot February 18 2009, 20:17:19 UTC

Excellent! This is a really interesting premise, a coming of age - island style. with the reminder of where home would always be.

kellysparrow February 18 2009, 21:38:26 UTC

Thank you! :)

Somehow, I always like to think of the island as home. For most of our losties it has become their home and I hope the writers will somehow include this in S6. Anyway, I like to incorporate this into my fics and I'm glad you liked it!