a stereotypical story

Apr 02, 2009 19:24

with the ongoing discussion of stereotypes throughout our blackboard discussions and reading other people's entries, i thought that i would take Georgina F (thank you!) up on her suggestion to write a short story on stereotypes based on last week's journal entry. please keep in mind that i'm not a fan of writing short stories, so this is a bit ( Read more... )

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agoodventure April 7 2009, 02:17:47 UTC
Hey Kelly =)

This was an interesting form of a short story.

I like how you exposed the insecurities and vulnerabilty felt by contemporary girls.

Moreover, your use of rhetorical questioning to start this story gave the reader an idea of what the story will be about.

However, I would have liked to read a full length story =(

I enjoyed where this story was going! more plsss

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