week 10: fear
ok everybody...here is my poem for week 10. It's one of those inside jokes-so don't worry if you don't understand it. I'm just rambling AGAIN =D
fear nothing
but fear
or so i am told.
yet nothing
but you
can make
my fear unfold.
the way you look
the way you see
the way i hear you
coming near me.
the way that you move
so daintily.
makes me feel sick ( Read more... )
fear nothing
but fear
or so i am told.
yet nothing
but you
can make
my fear unfold.
the way you look
the way you see
the way i hear you
coming near me.
the way that you move
so daintily.
makes me feel sick ( Read more... )
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aww kelly this is such a nice poem =)
when i was reading it, even though i already knew what your fear was, i anticipated the part where you reveal your fear.
if you hadn't revealed your fear, it would allow the reader to reflect a bit more and try to decipher your poem in order to discover what it is. ( just putting that out there )
yay kelly for yet another accidental work of art!
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i loathe
i despise.
is the multicoloured beast
most call butterflies.
NOW that was just a BRILLANT poem!!! You had me worried for a bit there! :-) I was beginning to think you were talking about a person, or a creature of some sort! lol. Awesome stuff Kell! Really enjoyed your work this week
:-)Brillant job!
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Awesome poem. I love the rhyming scheme. If you ask me a good poem must rhyme!
"the one thing i hate
i loathe
i despise.
is the multicoloured beast
most call butterflies."
This bit is my favourite. It really sums up the poem and has a surprise twist at the end.
Awesome stuff Kelly. Congrats!
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xoxo Cassandra
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