Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit, what a way to end the chapter! Now I'm getting super excited for when everyone finds out about their relationship!! Man, I can only imagine their reactions.
Poor Alfons though, he's been so isolated these past few chapters; I'm looking forward to when he and the others get onto good speaking terms. And ooooh Ed, ;; please be happy soon. Alfons is comin' for yooouuu!
C: I'm so happy you've stayed with this fic for so long. I don't think I could ever have the same amount of dedication as you to a project!
And oh yeah, is Harris supposed to look like any particular character in the series. 'Cause if not, I kinda want to draw him just to see how he'd look like. In which case, do you think you could give me a description of him, since it'd be kinda hard looking for it again in the story.....
Oh wow, long time no see! :) Heh, I look back and I'm amazed at myself for sticking to it; I think the trick is not thinking about the length, but about all the cool stuff I still want to write and haven't gotten to yet. I'm really glad you're still enjoying the fic ♥
As for Harris, yep, he's an original character. The description I gave of him was: He was well-dressed and broad shouldered, clean shaven but for a moustache, with short, fair hair. ...which isn't actually much to go by XDD to be fair, it was Al's POV and he wasn't terribly interested But since he's the double of Alfons' dad, there should be some similarity in features to Alfons (though, they would have to be in such a way that he's not terribly similar to Al... which genetically probably doesn't make much sense XD). Probably pretty Aryan-looking, given how Alfons looks...
I would absolutely love to see what you would come up with! squee
I commented and squeeed via FFN, but I just had to leave a comment here too, to say that this new chapter is delightful and heartwrenching, and I want to hug Ed and Alfons and Al all at once and have a big Elric hug orgy. Even though Al is being a brat. ;)
LJ's a bit more convenient for commenting back, though, I think :) so I'm glad you commented here, too. I'm glad that Alfons' misery is coming through. I was kinda afraid that it wouldn't be noticed, almost, because Ed's suffering right now in a very dramatic way. .........boy do I like tormenting the characters >_> I'm really glad you liked the chapter! And yeah, the next one should be quite a bit of fun (and maybe slightly less depressing, too, which will be a nice change XD)
And I kinda love bratty Al. He's 14, and he's gone through a lot of crap. His sweet nature is still there, but he's got some stuff to overcome, first.
It's a sign that my fondness for Alfons has reached unprecedented heights; I enjoy torturing him. I've been enjoying being mean to Al, too, but you don't see it as much 'cause of the POV. I'm glad you like what I did with the soul alchemy. I sort of wanted to portray it as something a bit sinister, that maybe shouldn't be messed with lightly. It's something Al's going to have to learn to be careful with.
There should be some visiting and cuddles, yes :) no point in hiding it, this chapter makes it fairly obvious. unless I throw a wrench in it, of course...
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Poor Alfons though, he's been so isolated these past few chapters; I'm looking forward to when he and the others get onto good speaking terms. And ooooh Ed, ;; please be happy soon. Alfons is comin' for yooouuu!
C: I'm so happy you've stayed with this fic for so long. I don't think I could ever have the same amount of dedication as you to a project!
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Heh, I look back and I'm amazed at myself for sticking to it; I think the trick is not thinking about the length, but about all the cool stuff I still want to write and haven't gotten to yet.
I'm really glad you're still enjoying the fic ♥
As for Harris, yep, he's an original character. The description I gave of him was: He was well-dressed and broad shouldered, clean shaven but for a moustache, with short, fair hair.
...which isn't actually much to go by XDD to be fair, it was Al's POV and he wasn't terribly interested
But since he's the double of Alfons' dad, there should be some similarity in features to Alfons (though, they would have to be in such a way that he's not terribly similar to Al... which genetically probably doesn't make much sense XD). Probably pretty Aryan-looking, given how Alfons looks...
I would absolutely love to see what you would come up with! squee
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I'm glad that Alfons' misery is coming through. I was kinda afraid that it wouldn't be noticed, almost, because Ed's suffering right now in a very dramatic way.
.........boy do I like tormenting the characters >_>
I'm really glad you liked the chapter! And yeah, the next one should be quite a bit of fun (and maybe slightly less depressing, too, which will be a nice change XD)
And I kinda love bratty Al. He's 14, and he's gone through a lot of crap. His sweet nature is still there, but he's got some stuff to overcome, first.
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I'm glad you like what I did with the soul alchemy. I sort of wanted to portray it as something a bit sinister, that maybe shouldn't be messed with lightly. It's something Al's going to have to learn to be careful with.
There should be some visiting and cuddles, yes :) no point in hiding it, this chapter makes it fairly obvious. unless I throw a wrench in it, of course...
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