Wow, talk about dangling something in front of them and then snatching it away. This is definitely bad.
Awesome chapter, thank you so much for it. I have to say that part of me is upset that the boys are still dealing with all this strife, and part of me is happy, because more problems mean more resolutions to be had before the story is over and done with. :)
>_> I did try to hint earlier that the bad guys had Something Up Their Sleeve....
The fact that you're happy that there's still more conflict to go is good - it means this monster of a fic is still on track :) I can reassure, though, that I have yet to deviate from the plot as I planned it when I first started. I swear I'm not making up random ~*twists*~ XD
I'm a bad person, I sort of giggled. But I'm very glad you enjoyed the chapter so much~ It was actually such a relief for me to write Ed and Alfons together again. I missed it so much, you wouldn't believe it ^^U Nope, no breaks in my fic!
I started reading this over on FF.net about a year ago. I still look forward to all your updates, because this story idea & the way you tell it is just amazing. The plot twists, especially the latest, keep me on the edge of my seat.
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I was on the edge of my seat for the whole time and I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DID THAT!
LOVED it, every sentence, and I'm so glad Winry has come around to Alphons because he's seriously going to need at least one friend through this.
Poor Edward- how the hell are you going to get him out of this one?
Brilliant chapter, can't wait for the next one, and I'm glad things are better for you than they were ^^
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The truth is, I'm very fond of the idea of Winry+Alfons friendship, so I'm glad it's working out.
Poor Ed... but look at the bright side! He did have some happy time with Alfons this chapter. It doesn't all suck....
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Wow, talk about dangling something in front of them and then snatching it away. This is definitely bad.
Awesome chapter, thank you so much for it. I have to say that part of me is upset that the boys are still dealing with all this strife, and part of me is happy, because more problems mean more resolutions to be had before the story is over and done with. :)
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The fact that you're happy that there's still more conflict to go is good - it means this monster of a fic is still on track :)
I can reassure, though, that I have yet to deviate from the plot as I planned it when I first started. I swear I'm not making up random ~*twists*~ XD
I'm very glad you enjoyed ♥
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I'm a bad person, I sort of giggled. But I'm very glad you enjoyed the chapter so much~
It was actually such a relief for me to write Ed and Alfons together again. I missed it so much, you wouldn't believe it ^^U
Nope, no breaks in my fic!
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o. fuck.
I didn't think I could see these boys suffer any more . . . wow. Never even thought of the possibility of going there. Wow.
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>_> er, well. I suppose things can always get worse? it's not even that bad in terms of what goes on in fanfic! I mean, nobody was raped, right? :P
I'm really glad you liked the chapter :)
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