Redundant

[keylimebliss]

by: 
keylimebliss 
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Yesung/Eunhyuk
AN: For nhi, because this was the original birthday fic I deemed to sad for a birthday gift.

He’s standing in front of you nervously, holding out a red bundle of roses accented with pure white baby’s breath held by an equally white teddy bear and it’s the very realization of the perfect Valentine’

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[keylimebliss]

for fabriclies because...idk?

This was your original gift I'm not sure you really want but I kinda liked.

[fabriclies]

hukjikslgfd. oh gawd. you make me get into yehyuk all over again because even i can't deny kyuhyuk and oh. you know, i like this more than all those lovely drabbles you wrote me and i think that's saying a lot. ;__; gah, i love it, i really really do, and eff, i can't even think what to say about it. just. it hurts really good and sijfdlg. and even if it weren't for me, i would still mem it because hell, why is this fic beautiful all over D:

[keylimebliss]

I just noticed how much fail! grammar my spot comment was. XD

I'm glad you liked it. =D

[ai_sumairu]

Wow... The love faded away just like that... Poor Hyukkie... *sigh* I should be mad at Sungie but I still love him! XD

[engraved_16]

DDDDDDDx what did hyukkie do that made yesung break it off? =(
&hearts i love your writing though
-sighs- it one of 'those' relationships, that seem so perfect at the start but the just break it off in the end

thanks for sharing though^^

[keylimebliss]

nothing, it's just that the relationship was too stereotypical.

Hyukjae tried too hard to be the "ideal" boyfriend, instead of an real boyfriend. Get it? I'm not sure if that's a good explanation...

Thank's for liking it though. =D

[engraved_16]

ohh i see
i get it now thanks ^^

[keylimebliss]

Yeah, it's Yesung's POV.

Not really spending more time, but stop trying to be the "perfect" boyfriend.

What Yesung was discontent with was the shallowness of the relationship.

I'll try...

[jishu]

I love this was written ^_^