f(x), sulli/amber, 3
anonymous
October 8 2011, 11:00:34 UTC
the fuck is this shitty angst idek :( i'm sorry ;________; lol wrote this on my itouch so there are probable typos all over thisJinri should have known from that time when she woke up in the middle of the night only to see Amber's bare bed and to find her lying on her blanket on the rooftop of their apartment complex
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Re: infinite, wooL/woogyu (holding cell au), #2
anonymous
October 8 2011, 11:20:34 UTC
i did! i'm glad you liked it~! the dreams weren't supposed to play such a huge part in this but i've reverted to making it up as i go :| i foresee a lot of editting when this is done.
Re: infinite, wooL/woogyu (holding cell au), #2
anonymous
October 8 2011, 15:32:46 UTC
oh my god ow anon (or not), YOU HAVE ME SO INTRIGUED like L came out of nowhere but the more he shows up the more I need to know how this is all linked ;~~~~~;
shinee; jongyu; 2
anonymous
October 8 2011, 11:17:54 UTC
He sees the scene playing out in his head, face blushing furiously at a contact never before reached. It doesn't mean anything, really, nothing more than what he thinks it does
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Re: shinee; jongyu; 2
anonymous
October 8 2011, 11:46:19 UTC
Your hes are a little messy, TBH. I found myself confused once or twice. It's a problem when you're writing same-sex and against your will you're forced to use names quite often or phrases like "the older", "the brunette", "his bandmate" etc. But I do think you should revise that aspect. I just feel like this could have a lot more clarity, especially grammatically, than it does right now.
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I love this. @.@ I am dying from curiosity. Save me~~
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ohohohohoho
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is it almost finished ):
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