LJ Idol Week 2 - Fold

[kianna_leigh]

“This house has a unique history. Not because of the people who lived in it, but because of the people who disappeared in it. Completed in 1901 in Berwick Maine and originally named Caufield Manor the house was built by Henry Caufield, a wealthy English gentleman who came to New England to expand his business. He moved his family into the house in

Comments

[lawchicky]

Great idea!

[faerie_spark]

What a neat mystery story. Very well-written and moves along at a good pace with just enough detail.

[kianna_leigh]

Thanks. For some reason parallel words just jumped out at me when I read the prompt. I blame Doctor Who.

[emo_snal]

Interesting! Though if it works in reverse it seems like at some point someone would have been accidentally been dumped "in reverse" -- after all there are more likely to be people on steps at 12:35 pm than 12:35 am.......

[kianna_leigh]

I'm glad you thought of that. I really want it to work in reverse, but that detail keeps popping out at me. Poor Henri. She's probably stuck.

[eternal_ot]

What a Story!! And yeah.. i wuld be waiting for you to complete it...soon...:) Best wishes!!

[kianna_leigh]

I'm glad you liked it. I hope to at least finished this off one day.

[fodschwazzle]

Nice take on the missing stair as both a stair that is missing and a stair that makes you go missing. It built up very nicely.

[kianna_leigh]

I'm glad that you liked it. I worried a little about the pacing so I'm glad to her it built up okay.