LJ Idol Week 2 - Fold

[kianna_leigh]

“This house has a unique history. Not because of the people who lived in it, but because of the people who disappeared in it. Completed in 1901 in Berwick Maine and originally named Caufield Manor the house was built by Henry Caufield, a wealthy English gentleman who came to New England to expand his business. He moved his family into the house in

Comments

[i_will_not_say]

This was a cool story. Yay parallel worlds! ^_^

[kianna_leigh]

Parallel worlds for the win. I blame Doctor Who.

[basric]

An interesting very orignal piece. I enjoyed it.

[kianna_leigh]

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[i_17bingo]

From mystery to haunted house to science fiction, with a killer, efficient introduction. I can't wait to read more--of this story (which could end here without diminishing it at all) or any other you might have in you.

[kianna_leigh]

OMG. Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

[halfshellvenus]

I liked the parallel universe discovery, rather than that the people had vanished completely. As weird as vanishing would be, think how random arrivals in YOUR universe would strike you!

[kianna_leigh]

And with a single comment you've turned this into a comedy, Good job! XD

[halfshellvenus]

Erp, sorry about that! Couldn't help think of the absurdity of it. At least that side of the equation could add up the clues a little more easily than the other side. :)