FIC: Dutch (1/1)

[kimonkey7]

Title: Dutch
Author: kimonkey7
Rating: PG-13 - for language
Pairing: none (gen) Dean, Sam
Disclaimer: Not mine. Damn it.
SPOILERS/Timeline: takes place S1, between eps 1&2

Summary: They stayed in Palo Alto for a week after the fire, looking for answers.

A/N: About a million years ago, it seems, I wrote this story for the Brotherhood zine. I'd

Comments

[pdragon76]

...the air’s hotter than a crotch...

Still as hauntingly atmospheric as the first time I read it. Conjures the exact moistness of the inside of any given pants.

You. You are my hero. Stay real.

[kimonkey7]

I have to give credit where credit is due; the line's stolen from my incessant watching of the Pornographic Weather Channel, where all climes are described with appropriately temperate body parts. You should really check out their hurricane coverage...

*pokes you in the eyes*

[arliss]

S1 boys! I miss those guys.

[kimonkey7]

ME, TOO.

[irismay42]

*Sniffle* Heartbreaking in and of itself, but even more so in the light of the five seasons of heartbreak that were still to come for the boys. I do like the "What am I supposed to do?" refrain. Not sure if you wrote this before AHBL2, but that was a really nice mirror to that episode, especially the contrast between Sam's reaction to the loss of Jess and Dean's subsequent reaction to the loss of Sam.

Awesome stuff. And great to see some fic from you!

[kimonkey7]

Thank you, my dear.

This one was written...about a year and a half ago, I think? So, after AHBL2, but to be honest, I'd completely forgotten Dean's heartbreaking line; it was subconscious mirroring if anything.

I don't know about you, but it's really hard to write these days. I have such mixed feelings about show's choices made with characters I grew to adore and how they subsequently changed in canon. *screws up mouth* I don't feel like I know them how I used to, and I can't just ignore their creator's choices with them, if that makes sense...

Anyhoo.

Blast from the past, and all that. I miss the early days something fierce.

[irismay42]

Well season 6 is supposedly going back to the show's season 1 roots, so maybe you'll find yourself re-inspired!

[kjfri]

Just what I've been craving - some season 1 boys and dirty diner descriptions. THANK YOU for feeding my cravings!!

[kimonkey7]

*bows deeply*

Very happy to have served you, sweetie. And I get those same cravings with alarming frequency, lol!

Thanks for reading.

[brigid_tanner]

I miss season one boys. This was lovely and heartbreaking.

[kimonkey7]

Thanks. I miss them, too. Where did they go? I won't whine and say their creator's hijacked them and took them down a totally wrong road, but I miss the heart and soul that used to be an intricate part of both boys and their journey.

*makes sad face*

Thanks for your eyes.