Calculated Deciet.

Sep 24, 2007 23:33

 
Self-control gags your lips
So you'll not use them unwisely 
The sway of my hips
Calling out, enticing.
Deep down brown
You call your soul
But I can see it's not
Just a pile buried there
Steaming, stinking rot
The more you take
For yourself
The rottener you become
Self-less acts are the ones
That tuck you in at night
But upon waking, a brand new day
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cloverdryad September 25 2007, 17:07:49 UTC
Goddamn, remind me to stay on your good side, haha! This is really good, I enjoyed reading it.

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cloverdryad September 25 2007, 20:33:01 UTC
I just realized that my previous comment may appear sort of trite considering the deeply emotional tone of Calculated Deceit. Hopefully it didn't come across that way..I truly enjoyed reading it. :)

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Thanks! I'm glad you like it :D kindell September 26 2007, 22:33:51 UTC
No worries. I never post things that everyone can read if the issue is still too close to my heart. It's been some time since I realized those intentions and have had time to consider all the facets of my "friendship" with this person. And so now I'm the one who's being decietful by not letting on that I know :)

It's kinda funny to sit back and watch someone who thinks they are fooling you.. You let them think they are.. You can see the wheels turning and the ever-fleeting moments of truth before they have the chance to cover them up.

Makes me feel soooooooo smart ;) jk. xoxo

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sirmacncheese September 25 2007, 21:54:31 UTC
um...wow.

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um... kindell September 26 2007, 22:34:37 UTC
in a good way i hope?

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loveandcherish September 28 2007, 22:47:42 UTC
You've always been a great writer.

I love it.

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kindell September 29 2007, 13:06:06 UTC
Thanks :) I'm glad you like it. I'm thinkning about submitting to World Lit Today but I don't know... Anyway. Be groovy! ;)

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