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Chapter Nine: Real Life Dreams

Jul 11, 2008 00:08

Title: Skinned Knees and Broken Hearts
Author: KioraDragon
Paring: Brian/Zacky, Jimmy/Johnny, Matt/Val (there’s no het, I promise. But Val had to be there cause she’s just awesome!)
Rating: Pg-13 to NC-17
Summary: "Sometimes I wish I was a little kid again, skinned knees are easier to fix than broken hearts." - Anon
Disclaimer: This obviously did ( Read more... )

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Comments 76

angelxvengeance July 11 2008, 04:48:35 UTC

Awwww so adorable
looking forward to reading the next one
=]

kioradragon July 11 2008, 22:44:00 UTC

Thank you!
I'll try to get the next one up as fast as possible. XD

angelxvengeance July 12 2008, 00:09:34 UTC

Yay XD
I can't wait for Zacky to be his 26 year old self again

kioradragon July 13 2008, 04:44:37 UTC

He'll be back to 26 soon enough! I sware X3

blaqkheaven July 11 2008, 04:52:37 UTC

I thought it was good, albeit with a few errors in spelling and grammar, but I can't wait until Zacky's old again, so Syn can finally tell him that he loves him and they live happily ever after in a land of boysex. I'm glad Matt's not a jerkface now.

kioradragon July 11 2008, 22:46:36 UTC

Yeah,it's not beta'd... *winces* oops XD
Well, this is the last chaper with baby Zacky in it X3 so that happily ever after should be coming really soon. Yes, Matt has finaly pulled his head out of his rear and seen the light of day.

brokenscreamx July 11 2008, 05:00:00 UTC

You have several spelling mistakes and half-way through you switch from past to present tense. You might wanna go back over it and check.
Other than that, I'm ready to see why Zacky's four, I have a hunch maybe Matt has something to do with it.
=]

kioradragon July 11 2008, 22:50:15 UTC

Yeah... *sheepish* it's not beta'd and my spelling is horrid. There was actualy a point to switching tense, it's like Matt's thinking back to what lead him up to Brian's door step.
Thank you, I will try to get the next part up soon. Matt however didn't really have much to do with Zacky being four.

erratic_entropy July 11 2008, 05:03:31 UTC

i've never commented before, but I've been reading since the very first chapter. Poor Matt, this explains chapter explains so much :(

Wonderful, just like all the other chapters.

Val had all but killed him when he had come home that day. He had wound up spending his nights on the couch since. He was pretty sure he was lucky to get that; considering Val had banned him from any type of bed, including the pull out one that was inside the sofa he was sleeping on.

P.S Val is awesome. lol

kioradragon July 11 2008, 22:53:50 UTC

That's quite alright! I'm glad that you liked it and left me a comment XD

Thank you!

Yes Val is awesome, X3 she is just too awesome not to be in it.

greenpants59 July 11 2008, 07:30:49 UTC

I think it's not healthy for me to get as excited as I do when I see this updated. ^_~

So the sex scene is a real memory and not a dream! How fabulously surprising! :] And I'm liking how Brian seems to be embracing his love for Zack.

I feel bad for Matt and his feeligns towards Zack but it doesn't excuse what he said by a loong shot. Icky was so cute, being protective of Zack and Zack was so cute being protective of Brian. :]

This was another glorious chapter!
Cheers!

kioradragon July 11 2008, 23:01:24 UTC

Pssssh, of course it's fine, you haven't developed any weird twitches right?... right?... *looks worried*

Yep yeps! It really happend! X3 Soon enough Brian and Zacky get to be all kissy face and other things... XD

Yeah, poor Matt, but he has Val, and Val is the nifftyness! So I don't feel too bad for him.

Icky loves his daddy... even if his daddy became four years old randomly.

X3 yes even four year old Zacky knows that Brian belongs to him and him only.

Thankies! I'll try to get the next part up really soon.