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kiroyo

Insomnia

Oct 28, 2011 22:55

Title: Insomnia
Chapter: Drabble
Author: kiroyo
Genre: Romance, Life
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I own this page of lies.
Rating: G
Pairing: Ruki x Kai
Synopsis: A language shared by everyone but never spoken by them.
Comments: Birthday fic

( When the first golden rays of sunshine kissed the pale skin of the drummer, Mother Nature bathed him in an unearthly glow, hazing away blemishes and blotches despite how unforgiving age may be. )

band: the gazette, pairing: rukixkai

Comments 21

theklewerz October 28 2011, 15:00:32 UTC

This is so sweet. The way you describe the sunrise on Kai was amazing. I love it.

I wish we all look that good when we got up in the morning.

kiroyo October 28 2011, 15:05:52 UTC

Thank you ^^

Haha don't we all? And I'm really into this pairing lately. And I knew you'd be the first to reply :P

theklewerz October 28 2011, 16:46:51 UTC

Somehow if you're writing about RuKai, you should make them like that. A bit of fluff, a bit of angst. But when it's Kaita, It's like cheesiness all the way! XD

*flipping my hair bang* Ain't I awesome? :P

kiroyo October 28 2011, 16:48:57 UTC

LOL yeah you are :D

Hmm it depends on my mood I guess. And I realise I can write better when I'm on the move!

himenojigoku October 28 2011, 17:17:52 UTC

This is was so cute and sweet❤ Lovely drabble!

kiroyo October 28 2011, 17:23:08 UTC

Thank you! ❤

cherrylng October 28 2011, 20:37:36 UTC

Kai: ...*is sleeping*
Ruki: *stares*
Kai: ...Ruki, did you have 5 cups of espresso again?
Ruki: ...Maaaaaaaaaybe?

Cute couple~

kiroyo October 29 2011, 02:42:38 UTC

Ohhhh dialogue after the end of fic ;P

cherrylng October 29 2011, 02:46:28 UTC

It's always fun to have dialogue after the end of a fic~ :P

kiroyo October 29 2011, 02:50:13 UTC

Haha they're sooo cute together :3

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k435y October 29 2011, 07:39:01 UTC

awwwwwwwwwwww... so sweet~ 8D thank you for sharing. =)

kiroyo October 29 2011, 07:39:48 UTC

:DD you're welcome (:

sekiryu November 9 2011, 08:10:44 UTC

You know what? This may just be my new fave fanfic XDDD

Did I tell you I love this pairing? Oh well, I love this pairing ^^ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

For some reason this gives me the feeling of them having been together for a long while ^^

I love how this is reflective, yet not really angsty d^^

And I love how you made it that Ruki seems to be acknowledging the works time has done on Kai, but yet still finds it beautiful and perfect d^^b

Overall, I just love this ♥ ♥ ♥

What the hell, here's more love for you ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

kiroyo November 12 2011, 11:31:29 UTC

RuKai? They are REALLY starting to grow on me. Like a cavity after nomming on too much cotton candy xDDD

Yup! Your feeling is spot on again!

Thanks for all the loveeee! There can never be too much to give/go around :DDD ♥ ♥ ♥