First chapter I'm proud of. XD

Jan 22, 2013 05:17


I wanted to post it since I'm proud of it. :D I think it came out really well.

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writing:original fiction, disability, apple:ipad, disability:autism, via ljapp, disability:anxiety, story:writing

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blackheart19 January 22 2013, 15:37:31 UTC
It's good, flows well, need a little bit of editing with spelling, but yeh, tis good. I am a bit confused though, i know i'm quite new to all of this, but to me she sounds like she has classic autism as opposed to high autism. I could be wrong here though :s or is it that some high funks (yeh i made that nikname up, i think it's kool) are really quiet and still but still suffer from overwhelming emotion and sensory stimulation, but also you get some who are loud and fidgety like you described. I'm confused

Also, i struggle with dealing with ordinary people and predicting what they'll do next and what is expected of me to 'relate' and in terms of how to communicate. But i find it more difficult with other special needs people who are loud and fidgety, because i don't know how to process or communicate or even understand what's going on. Any advice?

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kirukiruchan January 22 2013, 19:17:56 UTC
Well, I have a high functioning for of autism, also known as classic autism or autistic disorder. I think where she is more verbal and able to do certain things, it's easier for her to be considered in the high end. It is more or less considered classic autism, just that her communication skills are really good, only think lacking is her ABILITY to socialize in a setting where she needs to communicate.

Like, she can communicate well with her sister and her mother. But she struggles socially when having to deal with someone who she doesn't know, especially if they don't understand the nature of her behaviors.

And I really don't know. You're asking the wrong person on that one. I'm always super awkward around people, kind of like you so I always stay quiet all the time and don't say anything. D:

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blackheart19 January 22 2013, 21:39:27 UTC
ohhh oki :)

haha, yeh.

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kirukiruchan January 22 2013, 21:51:08 UTC
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3094194/1/Welcome-to-My-Life You can read all of it here. XD I actually got my first review so I'm going to stick around there for a while. ^^

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