AVALANCHE: Falling Leaf [4/?] -- PG

[kissontheneck]

[title] AVALANCHE: Falling Leaf [4/?]
[author] kissontheneck [aka fieryrogue]
[pairing] Cookleta, Marly UST, bromance!Mavid
[beta] the unique snowflake known as jehane18
[rating] PG
[word count] 4772
[summary] David is on a nice holiday ski trip with his family. Unfortunately, he doesn't know how to ski, but a couple private lessons should remedy that problem.
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Comments

[tiinakay]

Interesting story! Can't wait to read more, I want to know what happens next.

I love Archie's insecurities here. How he is taken with Cook having talked about him and then starts questioning whether Cook's been saying nice things or not. I just want to take these two and smush them together. Adorable ♥

[kissontheneck]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you have those feelings about them, goodness! ♥

[penrith1]

Wonderful to see this again. I am really enjoying the slow build of their relationship. Awkward, unsure David is always a treat and Cook well Cook is a dream. Warm and understanding and of course athletic. He almost writes himself. Or I should say you make writing him seem easy. Great story.

[kissontheneck]

Aww, thank you for your kind comment! I'm so glad you're enjoying it. :)

[lady_michaelis]

YAAAAAAAAAAAAY. FINALLY. AN UPDATE. :D

Now...I WANT MORE.

[kissontheneck]

You guys are never satisfied! ;D

[eishea]

sdhakjHDASD this storyyyy <3 yay for an update i love any kind of teacher!cook and student!bb...your write them so irresistible! can't wait for more =)

[kissontheneck]

Oh, thank you so much, that really means a lot!

[jehane_writes]

YAY, someone wrote me a love poem ♥

You know how much love I have for this story. And for you. :)

And, DUDE, SERIOUSLY. UTAHN???

[kissontheneck]

Oh, gooosh, you! This is me: