YOÜ AND I -- R

Mar 30, 2012 04:11

[title] Yoü and I
[author] kissontheneck [a.k.a. fieryrogue]
[pairing] Cookleta
[beta] None, so, you know.
[rating] R-ish?, language and sexual situations
[word count] 5314
[summary] David's been gone for two years, but now he's back in town.
[disclaimer] Surely, I have nothing to do with either of these fine young men, no matter how much I wish I did.
[warnings] Angsty ( Read more... )

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kissontheneck April 20 2012, 07:46:04 UTC
Oh my gosh, thank you so much!

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rajkumari905 March 30 2012, 15:11:30 UTC
Ohhhh my god I love you soooo much. AND I LOVE THIS A LOT. Favorite mission fic so far.

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kissontheneck April 20 2012, 07:46:53 UTC
Yaaaaay. The Pri stamp of approval makes me so proud! It's like the Newberry award or something. :D

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james_padfoot March 30 2012, 15:36:39 UTC
*sobs*

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kissontheneck April 20 2012, 07:47:28 UTC
OMG, don't cry!! **litters with tissues**

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asweetdownfall March 30 2012, 16:56:47 UTC
*___________________________* This is amazing. The writing is beautiful and so vivid and I love the way you write the boys (especially the nicknames they give each other) and the ENDING oh my god.

brb rereading this 1858602472957 times <3

ETA: Oh and Cook quoting Casablanca in the end? MY HEART. Gah.

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kissontheneck April 20 2012, 07:50:20 UTC
Aww, thanks so much! I was really afraid the nicknames were a bit dorky, but I did it in the vein of how Lady G refers to "Nebraska" in the song and... well, I'm just glad that maybe it wasn't as dorky as I feared. :)

Casablanca! That literally came to me at the last second, and I'm so glad it did. ♥

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doctor_jehane April 20 2012, 12:19:58 UTC
Not AT ALL dorky - I loved how she did it in the song, and you used it in a way that was totally evocative of song and situation.

In fact (wearing betahat), you could have done with telegraphing/explaining it *less*, even, and have just busted out with it, and it would have been just as evocative; moreso because you didn't set it up, and showed not told, yk? (Tl;dr=Own the dorkiness, don't need to justify it.)

Okay, going back to lurk in corner. Man, I miss betaing.

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kissontheneck April 20 2012, 20:38:41 UTC
Show, don't tell! Not the first time I've gotten that note. (Hmm.) Yes, I'm seeing a cute way that could've been done. That's how Lady G did it after all. Anyway, all this affirmation makes me so smiley! As you know, I constantly worry that things only make sense to me because it's in my brain and that I'm failing to convey it outward to the world. Ah, the eternal struggle of the artist, right?

Hee, stop lurking in corners! ILU. Come out and plaaaaay. ♥

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autumn_screams March 30 2012, 17:16:44 UTC
Love this! The Casablanca quote nearly killed me😍

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kissontheneck April 20 2012, 07:51:08 UTC
Oh my gosh, sorry for the near death! But thank you! :D

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