Comments | kissontheneck: ZERO GRAVITY -- PG

kissontheneck

ZERO GRAVITY -- PG

May 04, 2009 22:14

[title] Zero Gravity
[author] kissontheneck [a.k.a. fieryrogue]
[pairing] Cookleta
[beta] None. You may harrass me if there are verb tense problems, LOL.
[rating] PG, language
[word count] 1717
[summary] The difference one person can make.
[disclaimer] Surely, I have nothing to do with either of these fine young men, no matter how much I wish I did.
[warnings] Serious ( Read more... )

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Comments 36

jehane_writes May 5 2009, 05:41:07 UTC

Butting in to say that this was wonderful and gave me the warm fuzzies today. Slashophile is such a lucky, lucky girl!

You write Cook as perfectly as you write Archie - it would come across a bit too squeeing fangirl than I care to admit to tell you that I, um, printed out your HILARIOUS AND TOTALLY HOT closetfic, so that I can read it when needed. Except, um, I did just admit that? Told you I was shameless ;)

slashophile May 5 2009, 06:17:38 UTC

I am crazy lucky to be married to this woman, I swear.

jehane_writes May 6 2009, 03:58:16 UTC

That is so sweet. Hope your birthday was happy!

slashophile May 6 2009, 06:45:21 UTC

It was! Thank you for the well wishes! *hugs*

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theskyturnsred May 5 2009, 06:00:32 UTC

This was really really a nice story. Although it took me a really long time to figure out which David was which, haha. But I liked the style of writing you have here and the progression and the frustration and the build up and then at the end, everything's okay. It was beautiful.

kissontheneck May 5 2009, 07:20:58 UTC

Wow, thank you! Sorry if it was confusing at first! But thank you sooo much, I really appreciate your feedback. :)

slashophile May 5 2009, 06:07:38 UTC

David was out of town until sometime today, and so the back-up alarm that you preferred -- him gently touching you and saying he was going for his run -- hadn't been there, and somehow you ignored the annoying one and kept on sleeping on.

HELLO PERFECT LINE OF PERFECTION.

Your hamburger was overcooked, the fries colder than the graying sky, and they gave you a strawberry milkshake instead of chocolate, which in itself isn't so bad except that the thing tasted like shit and you nearly chucked it out the window on the freeway.

Strawberry milkshakes should always be chucked, Cookie. ALWAYS.

It's a good thing too -- you were about ready to curse David being so small that you can't wear any of his clothes, because of course, his dresser is always full of clean clothes. Always

He so would, the tidy little bastard.

You can feel him getting closer, even without seeing him, and you groan gently when your shoulders are met with delicate hands that automatically begin kneading against your neck.He so would, the considerate ( ... )

kissontheneck May 5 2009, 07:14:59 UTC

I don't know how to reply to this, okay? I just don't! But like... thank you? Yes. Thank you.

OMG, you kill me with your commentary though. Archie, that tidy, considerate bastard. Damn him. XD

OMG, you did not tear up. You didn't. (Okay, I know you did and... awww, swweeeet.) But yeah, that is what I want too. I mean, I've felt that before so I long for it again and... yeah.

Also? Do not deny. Me + You = Zero Gravity, okay? Srsly.

I love you tooo, and I am glad to have started your birthday in a good way and WEEEEEEE. You deserve it, baby.

Also? ICON FTW. Really. If I do say so myself. XD

slashophile May 5 2009, 07:46:25 UTC

OHMYGOSH. WHAT? I love you. *hugs and loves* Your comment back is like ridiculously sweet and ACK. LOVED IT.

I'm still just like flailing and can't believe you wrote me something so beautiful, omg.

You complete me.

kissontheneck May 6 2009, 06:58:28 UTC

You had me at "hello".

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kissontheneck May 5 2009, 07:27:43 UTC

Wow, thank you so much. You said something that is exactly how I've described this, at least to myself, and that is "he's not actually home until he has that all-important person beside him." Like I mean, because I've felt that about someone, someone who made me feel safe and comfortable and at home. No matter where we were.

Thanks so much for your kind words. They are extremely appreciated. ♥

lire_casander May 5 2009, 09:45:57 UTC

Thank you for this lovely story. I have been there, done that, and didn't have anyone to comfort me at the end of the day until very recently, so I know how it feels. And I totally loved this.

*hugs you*

kissontheneck May 7 2009, 05:37:03 UTC

Aww, baby, I'm glad it came across that way. You saying that helped me know it was realistic. Thank you. ♥