Anticlimactic?

[kit27kit]

I feel like this piece needs more work. Deserves more work.
I just can't figure out where to start. So, as always, I post it here, once again possibly restricting its future publishability... or not. Like I know. ...I should actually find these things out.

Whatever. Feedback welcomed.

infinite tape measure
by Kit FitzSimonsit stretches to the

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[xenosauridae]

I feel like the distinction between the two parts (the measuring of the cosmos and the recoiling tape measure) should be made more distinct.

I like "fricative zizz" and "infinite-grandson".