Comments | kitariii: skating on ice; onkey; pg-13

kitariii

skating on ice; onkey; pg-13

Feb 01, 2011 14:08

skating on ice
Author: kitariii
Pairing: Onew/Key
Genre: Fluff

( Just keep on gliding but don’t glide too fast, remember to control yourself because if not then you’d end up either losing your balance and falling or you’d smack straight onto the walls of the rink. There are boundaries that you just can’t pass. )

pairing: onew/key, fandom: shinee, fanfic

Comments 30

itssimplykate February 1 2011, 12:20:30 UTC

I really liked this !
You're play on words was absolutly perfect.

kitariii February 5 2011, 16:38:00 UTC

Aww, thanks for that touching comment bb ♥
And thanks again for reading :)

rinni1905 February 1 2011, 12:25:54 UTC

Aw, the fic is really good, I have to say that I've never thought of skating that way. I even found it was boring sometimes too, but after reading this, I have to change my thinking about skating from now on. I love how sweet Jinki was with Kibum, although I don't know that if Jinki had some hidden feeling for Kibum or not, since you didn't mention it, his caring nature really make me feel warm inside, and Kibum must feel that too ( ... )

kitariii February 5 2011, 16:45:10 UTC

Skating in it's own way is really fun, others think that it's really hard when in fact, it just easy - you just have to have the courage to stand on thin skates on ice. Just like love no? And ohh, I love it too, his unique way of sweetness - it's like those sugar free candies yet still causes cavities. orz did that make sense sorry xD

Oh I'm glad that you liked that part ^^ Honestly speaking, as much as I love Jinki's meek and adorable side, his mature side gives off a certain vibe that I love reading about.

Aww, no problem. Thanks so much for your inspiring comment bb ♥
And of course, it's okay! I want to be your friend too :3

omiichan February 1 2011, 12:39:29 UTC

wow.. this is.. LOVE really.. i love it so much.. just loving the idea of this ice skating but having a very..what is it, a maeningful means behind it? (my english --")

Just like how you shouldn’t love to much and lose yourself, there are boundaries in love which one has to keep in mind of. However, said boundaries shouldn’t keep one from loving - treat it as something that would help improve what’s there already.

this.. and others to, the one with italic and the last one.. just loving the word.. ;_______;

i should really read ur previous and comment >w<~

kitariii February 5 2011, 17:02:04 UTC

aww thank you so much, i'm just so glad that you loved it. and no, i can understand, your english isn't bad! :D

I'm glad that you liked that last line, it meant a lot to me ♥

omaygawd February 1 2011, 13:07:06 UTC

awwww, understand between the lines Kibum. what a way to help someone get over a break up. good job Jinki! <3

kitariii February 5 2011, 17:08:35 UTC

I know right, Kibum should read between the lines of what Jinki was saying, really.
Thanks for reading bb ♥

jhea76 February 1 2011, 13:12:29 UTC

I was being inspired of your words...
You're really nice..:)

And oww Take a rest...

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kitariii February 5 2011, 17:11:39 UTC

I'm glad to see that you can relate, bb. And seriously, Jinki has his own sweet yet cunningly good ways to swoon someone, huh? ♥

kitariii February 5 2011, 17:10:02 UTC

Aww, I'm glad that you were. :'3
Thanks so much for reading! ♥