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crime passionnel: deux [2/?] ; onkey

Feb 06, 2011 00:16

crime passionnel : deux
Author: kitariii
Rating: PG-15
Pairing: Onew / Key

( “Rule number one, you can’t let your personal emotions affect your work. Keep that in mind, it’s going to be the death of you.” He pauses. “Wait a minute, did you just say that a guy tongued you in order to get the chip from you… and you didn’t even budge him off? Kibum, if I didn’t know you I’d say you enjoyed it.” )

pairing: onew/key, fandom: shinee, fic: crime passionnel, fanfic

Comments 15

kitariii February 5 2011, 16:20:54 UTC

NAN JEONGMAL MYSTERY MYSTERY OHHH
SPOT FOR manongeunhyuk ♥

manongeunhyuk February 6 2011, 01:10:09 UTC

MYSTERY, MYSTERY WHY?
waahhhh this is getting more intriguing! And I pity Kibum for losing his father at the explosion. and I spot Kiwoon! Yeah! can't wait for the next chapter! ^____^

kitariii February 11 2011, 06:19:09 UTC

Well, it'll be more intriguing in the future then ;O; and yes, you do spot kiwoon ♥ Thanks for reading this, bb <3

chocolatos February 5 2011, 16:50:29 UTC

I'VE READ THE FIRST ONE =))

and this is still awesome <3

kitariii February 5 2011, 17:19:12 UTC

Glad to know that you read the first chapter too, thanks so much for reading and of course, for the compliment. ♥

volatileflame February 5 2011, 20:26:20 UTC

so cool >_<
i couldn't stop laughing at Key's predicament in the beginning though.

kitariii February 11 2011, 06:15:15 UTC

Thank you for reading ♥
Oh, that's just the first of Kibum's predicaments I tell you. Look forward for more!

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kitariii February 11 2011, 06:18:14 UTC

I was contemplating on using someone more badass (because dongwoon isn't really badass, he's a qt biased /shot but I felt like he'd fit the position more since well, he has a role to portray ^^
The answer whether Taemin really did die or not well, that's a mystery for now.

oic you used "J" because there's JINKI and JONGYUN. Good job bb, good job. :|
teehee ;DDD

Thanks for reading this bb, look forward for moreeee!

belintuchiha February 6 2011, 07:21:52 UTC

assddfadfdd I SO LIKE THIS STORY
an action/mystery or w/e theme fic haha
with ONKEY, my life's perfect XD
I'll just let the story flow before elaborating
any conclusions haha XD
I'll be waiting for the next update :O

kitariii February 11 2011, 06:20:14 UTC

asdfghjkl thanks for liking it ♥ hehe
do look forward for more, i'm glad you liked it! :)