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crime passionnel: deux [2/?] ; onkey

Feb 06, 2011 00:16

crime passionnel : deux
Author: kitariii
Rating: PG-15
Pairing: Onew / Key

( “Rule number one, you can’t let your personal emotions affect your work. Keep that in mind, it’s going to be the death of you.” He pauses. “Wait a minute, did you just say that a guy tongued you in order to get the chip from you… and you didn’t even budge him off? Kibum, if I didn’t know you I’d say you enjoyed it.” )

pairing: onew/key, fandom: shinee, fic: crime passionnel, fanfic

Comments 15

rinni1905 February 6 2011, 07:59:57 UTC

I was pretty sure the one kissed Kibum was Jinki before, keke, it maybe because of the crazy fangirl inside me saying, but I really doubt that it was Jinki now. Things get complicated, still I love the intense feeling that you gave this fic. It would make the fic much more interesting if you go slow, don't worry much but don't make it too slow, it would give a tired feeling for the reader.

I don't know what to say for this fic other than it is really good, and I'm dying to read the next chap. Keke, Dongwoon was a little pervy here, but oh, why I have the feeling that he just wanted to play around with people, while he was very much shy when he was with the one he actually likes. The "J" stands for "Jinki"? Haha, I don't know, but I think Kibum's partner wouldn't be someone too simple. I can't wait to know who Kibum's partner is. And I'm curious about Taemin's role here. Update soon, ne?

kitariii February 11 2011, 06:24:17 UTC

Let's see whether the crazy fangirl in us is right or not but then we really can't be sure eh? keke ♥ I'm so thankful that you like this fic, you know. Look forward for more mystery in the future~

Dongwoon's attitude is just like that, no? I really wanted to portray him as a playful one yet like you've said, when faced with certain things (or people, in this case) he becomes soft. Well, just to clear it out, Kibum's partner is someone you know and you'll find out in the next chapter, yes? Taemin's role here is... you'll find out soon! :3

playingods February 6 2011, 14:26:49 UTC

Nice update! ♥

but yeah you would use "J" instead of the real name. and here i am beginning to doubt between Jinki or Jonghyun. This two "J" is my weakness btw :|

kitariii February 11 2011, 06:26:13 UTC

Thank you reading bb ♥
Do look forward for the next chapter and find out who this 'J' is, okay? Take care! :D

adyaby February 13 2011, 23:08:46 UTC

O_O why are u like this?!?!?
wae?!? wae?!?!
i want moreee!!! Dx
i'm so impatient and it's only the 2nd chapter @_@