Thanx. Was un-beta-ed and alot of mistakes. Tried lj the whole day I wanted to post it, and lj kept making it look like crap. >< (Evil lj) I did this in quick session b/c I'm working on my m-preg fic 'Ziva's Betrayal' (Gibbs/DiNozzo), but I'm at a stand still b/c I'm dwnlding 'Ice Queen' and 'Meltdown' for more on NCIS' Gibbs & DiNozzo dynamic (Ducky and Abby as background noise). I like how it's coming so far, but that's IMO, so when it's posted- I'll be sitting on pins & needles for feedback. :\
Well, I did warn ya about the mistakes. :| I'm better off reading than writing, b/c I can't seem to get the story out of my head. I didn't have it like that in my head. Or, I'm better off writing drabbles or shorts... :\
Thanx for your opinion, didn't offend. Glad someone gives structive criticism.
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Thanx for your opinion, didn't offend. Glad someone gives structive criticism.
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And I already done that *bg*
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Just go down my page, u'll c 'em.
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