[FIC] Hold My Hands

[kitsune_hikaru]

Title: Hold My Hands

Author: kitsune_hikaru

Beta: ambrosse

Category: One-Shot

Pairing: Sakumoto

Rating: PG-13

Genre: Romance

Disclaimer: I don’t have that much money to buy them... In fact, owning people these days are no longer legal.

Warning: Un-betaed this time. I don’t get the time to beta this fic... Though I always prefer my Arashi fics to be perfect... T_________T

Comments

[boblemon]

That was very cute! I think my favorite part was when they kissed, when Sho could tell that something had changed from before, and I especially liked that Sho didn't give up even when he realized that he couldn't understand Jun as well as he could when they were younger. And of course Jun caring so much for Arashi, because that's definitely the way he is.

Thanks for sharing!

[kitsune_hikaru]

aaah, i agree with u... when i was writing this in ryouchi n juntoshi version, i just find it a bit off, n when i finally put in a sakumoto, it fit just fine~~ bcoz, well, jun cares too much about arashi... ^^

n yeah, sho didnt give up on jun... i actually had troubles with jun's character though... i dont think he is the too quiet one, but i wonder if he will talk much when he had problems in his mind...

thank u so much for reading n analyzing it in ur own view... do tell me if i should improve my characters~~ ^^

[xxxhikari]

This is really lovely ♥
Thanks for sharing :D

[kitsune_hikaru]

thank u soo much for reading n complimenting~~
^^
i'm glad u enjoyed it~~

[elyon14340]

Ah, I really like stories that tackle the transition of Jun's personality -- from the Sho fanboy to the idol that he is now.

This was beautifully written. I have to tell you that a lot of your lines made me smile, because they're so dead on and are just plain truth. I like it when fics include a little portion of truth in them. It makes everything you wrote likely and realistic. :)

[kitsune_hikaru]

okay, ur comment just made me feel so glad that i made this a sakumoto fic~~ XD
i wasnt satisfied how the fic turned out with the ryouchi n juntoshi version... idk, this version sounded less awkward...
ikr~!!! jun was such a sho fanboy before, i loved how their relationship developed until the point they are now~~ XD

awww, thank u for ur compliment, though i went through it again n spotted a few grammatical errors, i corrected some already...
i'm glad i can make u smile at least~~ ^^
i hope the characters fit well in the plot... jun's character is much of what i imagined when he is troubled, i'm not sure... do tell me if i was wrong~~ ^^

thank u soo much for reading, dear~~ ;)

[dekkawai]

cute x3
thank you for making this xD

[kitsune_hikaru]

thanks for reading~~
^^
i'm so glad u liked it~~
*hugs*

[jellybean6972]

I think this does really fit Sakumoto :D
I really enjoyed reading this. It's really sweet. Thanks for sharing :D

[kitsune_hikaru]

yay~~ *glomps u*
thank u for agreeing with me~~
i think it suits sakumoto too~~ ^^
actually i can include their latest controversy n end it at their record breaking single as jun's reassuring of their struggles, but then i think the Kokuritsu concert mark a better one... hehe...
thank u soo much for reading~~
glad u liked it~
;)