Comments | kiwi_nana: <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/30smiles">30smiles</a></strong> ♥ These shallow etches in my heart

kiwi_nana

Dec 21, 2008 23:40

30smiles Set Alpha #27

These shallow etches in my heart
537 words; PG; angst, fluff; Yesung-centric, K.R.Y

( Of the many things Yesung could never tell you, Yesung would never tell you when he knew about the faint engravings in his heart. )

Comments 13

polyurethane December 22 2008, 00:26:57 UTC

Awwww~~

I really liked that.

Just the flow and the wording and...

Everything was really nice.

I especially liked the last line.

♥

jojibear December 22 2008, 00:59:38 UTC

Thank you~ ♥

schm0use December 22 2008, 01:22:51 UTC

K.R.Y.~

their love. i am jealous of it.

jojibear December 22 2008, 12:24:30 UTC

Their love, I am jealous of it too~

But writing stories make me hungry so I'm going to go eat some rice now. xD

IRYSM unni~ ♥

pepsi_twist9 December 22 2008, 01:54:30 UTC

Aaw Yesung. He must really be lonely in real life though, especially with his latest boredon streaks. You wrote him really well here. ^^

jojibear December 22 2008, 12:25:20 UTC

Lol~ But the turtle was cuute~ x3

Thank you ♥

mikudaisuki December 22 2008, 02:05:02 UTC

I love it. It's very well written.
I miss yesung T_T

jojibear December 22 2008, 12:24:52 UTC

I miss Yesung too~

Thank you ♥

ai_sumairu December 22 2008, 04:06:21 UTC

Awwww... So touching... The last line is very much ♥!!!! XD

This is cute... :) I miss K.R.Y... :(

jojibear December 22 2008, 12:23:38 UTC

I miss K.R.Y too >: Let's make a club~

Thank you ♥