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kizzy7

New York, Veterans Day, Story

Nov 11, 2009 13:03

I’ll tell you, now. When I fist discovered his… indiscretions.

It was earlier, much earlier than I’ve ever admitted before. Yes, I know what you will say. To save myself, my job, I lied. Yes. I did. Hogwarts is my home. Was I complicit, then, in his wrongdoings? I think not. I was more of a… secret confidant to a troubled soul. But I’ll tell you ( Read more... )

sshg, writing, rl

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mimimanderly November 12 2009, 18:34:11 UTC

OMG... you have really channeled Trelawney here! I could see her and hear her so clearly! It was both laughable AND sad, the way she misconstrued Severus' feelings. I really liked this!

kizzy7 November 12 2009, 18:53:02 UTC

Yay! Thank you!

Pitiable, definitely, the crazy woman.

Glad you liked. Love it when my friends can enjoy my devious mind, LOL!

dynonugget November 13 2009, 00:39:18 UTC

That was NUTS! And I LOVED it! Bat-shit crazy, that one! Oh, man... *creeptastic*!!!

You've got to ride the bus more often, I think!!

kizzy7 November 13 2009, 00:57:51 UTC

LOL! Hmmm, something inspiring about the Greyhound, I think!! Good for the Muse.

Thanks, dyno! I am seriously excited that you loved it!

dynonugget November 13 2009, 01:07:02 UTC

It's fantastic! You've got to post this out on the sites!!

kizzy7 November 13 2009, 01:12:42 UTC

Ultimately, I did. I posted it to TPP, but I was considering not posting anywhere but here. As Hermione is underage, as its a bit different, as Trelawney it totally nutters, I was worried I was going to get a barrage of nasty reviews, LOL! The trolls! Having to defend/explain myself, ya know?

mollyssister November 18 2009, 04:13:57 UTC

WHOA!! I am here by way of the rec over at KIA. Im so glad I didnt shy away from this. I confess Sybil scares me at times. Your Sybil escpecially. She is delusional, calculated and so freaky!!! Makes me wonder what she will do next. If I were feeling really dark and twisted maybe she kills Granger??

Thank you!! !

kizzy7 November 18 2009, 20:00:54 UTC

Thank you, Molly!! Grinning like a fool here.

As for what she would do after? Usually, I don't really have a sense of where or what the characters will do when I'm done writing them, but here?! I definitely was thinking, 'OMG, watch out, Hermione!'

fauxamies December 16 2009, 05:35:22 UTC

Incredible. Trelawny lived and breathed through this piece.

The language was so believable, it was like a disturbing insight into the Trelawny of the book.

I loved every word.

kizzy7 December 16 2009, 16:29:07 UTC

Well, you've made my week! Thank you for such a lovely review.

Honestly, this is one of my fave things I've ever written. Don't know why, LOL! But thank you!

Wow sweettale4u September 4 2014, 03:38:19 UTC

This was all sorts of deranged. I have always had soft spot for Trelawney so I was a bit cautious. I have to say that you did a wonderful job describing her madness. Bravo.