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Fic: Chance in Hell, Part 6

Feb 17, 2009 10:12

Title: Chance in Hell, Part 6
Author: ehmaz
Characters: Patrick/Joker
Rated: NC-17
Disclaimer: I don't own these characters.
Warnings: Violence and murder, as always, hah.
Summary: Five days after their encounter in the Cadillac. Things didn't end so happily after all... can they still?
Notes: 4021 words. Sorry it's been so long since the last chapter.

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fic:bateman/joker, nc-17, series

Comments 15

fooln_what February 17 2009, 19:50:09 UTC

Yay for the update! ^_^
Just the right amount of.. honesty between them!
I loved the part when Pat gutted the prostitute with the music .. thoughts? Not as dry as in the book because there was always the action in between.
I loved the book references in general, and that Price and Evelyn are together now. It's just details but it makes the whole thing more fun.
And the Joker trailing off during business is so adorable!
To point out everything I liked I think I'd have to re-read the chapter which I don't have time for now, but... <3. Thanks for not letting it end XD

ehmaz February 17 2009, 22:41:11 UTC

Thanks for inspiring me to get this done XD Honestly I'd sort of put it in the back burner, I thought most of the interest in Pat/Joker had disappeared so I was concentrating on other projects. Then when you mentioned something I felt sort of bad for letting the story hang, because I love it soooooooooo much. This is definitely my OTP, as totally bizarre and cracky as it is. :) I'm so glad you liked it!

fooln_what February 19 2009, 15:17:53 UTC

Haha, if all I have to do is to remind you how greeeeeat this is I'd be happy to do that again XD

Yes, it's bizarre and cracky and that's why I love them so much! Usually there's no room for two psychopaths who interact (...*cough*), so this is double interesting. And hot, of course XD

Though I think my OTP will always be Bats/Joker. Just because it's the first I ever read and brought me to.. well, the Batman fandom and fandom in general. (Ah, the old days *sigh* ..wait, that was just a few months ago XD)

ehmaz February 20 2009, 14:12:08 UTC

wait, that was just a few months ago XD

Bahahahhaha XD That really made me laugh! You know it's so strange about this pairing because before this, I tooootally shied away from crossover fic. Actually, I still do for the most part, but just something about this pair... I love 'em to pieces!

I love Batman/Joker too though don't get me wrong ^_^

WOW jokerluv February 17 2009, 20:44:09 UTC

Read the whole story in one sitting and am glad you updated again, I hope that's a habit!!! LOL!!!

Their scenes are STEAMY HOT!!! And I LOVE the various positions, etc, gotta have variety, you'd be surprised how many people are SOOOOO BOOOORRRING!!!

I'm digging the way Joker is becoming addicted to Bateman, the tables are turning, yet his ruthlessness with Patsy, is simply BEAUTIFUL.

The interplay between the the information of Coldplay and what was happening with Patrick and the hooker reminded me so much of American Psycho, I could hear Bale's voice in that Bateman tone displaying his vast knowledge. And then The Joker appears, have to admit, I didn't see that one coming!!! TERRIFIC SCENE!!!

Keep up the great work and I can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Re: WOW ehmaz February 17 2009, 22:41:30 UTC

Thanks very much!

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Re: hurray! ehmaz February 17 2009, 23:43:58 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked the music commentary in there. I don't know anything about music or Coldplay so I had to fake it XD

peekabooby February 18 2009, 10:49:14 UTC

This was awesome! I am so glad you wrote a new chapter! ♥

However, I am SO thoroughly displeased that I now have a reason to smile when I hear Viva la Vida. Damn you. ;D

ehmaz February 18 2009, 11:14:02 UTC

Bahahha XD You know it was SO HARD trying to pick a song for this, because personally I have bizarre taste in music and I don't actually like Coldplay very much (their new album is pretty good actually but I hate their early stuff).

I was trying to think of something that Patrick Bateman would listen to that's current, and it was sooooo hard. I won't bore you with my whole thought process, but I finally came up with this song. I hope everyone thinks it fit :)

Thanks for commenting!

regularbean February 19 2009, 23:07:52 UTC

AHHHHH ( ... )

ehmaz February 20 2009, 14:01:21 UTC

Wow thank you for such a kind comment! I'm glad you enjoyed this part so much. I had a lot of fun writing it. Patrick's finally figuring out how to fit in with the Joker a little bit, and vice versa. It's not like these are two normally-functioning people here haha