Comments | kojafras: Critical Capture

kojafras

Critical Capture

Jun 07, 2014 12:35

Hail to the Chief
Suho/Chen, 2906

Winning is impossible when the opponent is Kim Jongdae.

( “You’re running.” Kris shifts to meet Joonmyun’s eyes. “Of course.” “Of course,” Joonmyun agrees with a half-grin. “It’s just that Kim Jongdae has entered the race too. )

ficexchange, pairing: suho/chen, fandom: exo

Comments 3

soft_daisy October 31 2014, 00:33:47 UTC

This is really beautiful with how you described Joonmyeon's perceptions of colors and I love how you opened the fic with his early childhood experiences! Makes me want to read more to see how their relationship develops. ^^ Thank you for writing and sharing this.

kojafras October 31 2014, 03:18:15 UTC

That's so sweet of you thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it ^^

louizant March 1 2017, 03:57:22 UTC

l o v e d i t
the way you added the rest of the boys was very very entertained to read :-( and the relationship between jongdae and joonmyun ¿¿¿ WAS SO¡¡¿¿¿ NICE!! ¿¿¿¿¿¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¿ !!!
this was such a good fic, thank you v much !!
my best best best best wishes for you ♡ ♡