Now What? Version 2

[kokopelli20878]

There were some niggling bits about the first draft that I didn't care for, so before I send it to my beta, I thought I'd post it here again.

Very subtle changes.

Waking up in a bed, a real bed, after a year of cold, hunger and too short, rickety camp beds and sleeping bags strewn over stones and tree roots was disorienting.  The discomfort in his

Comments

[gardengirl6]

Ver' nice. Making happy after long suffering is always a good thing!

[amamama]

Very good! I like the touch with Kreacher looking after him, lifting his arm up into his bed... and of course Ginny snuggling into him. Reads true, this feels like something that could've happened, and I love their slight bantering at the end. Feels very H/G to me.

[willbot]

you're missing a word:
...that we were grinding away LIKE crazed minks...

Fun story.