there is nothing wrong with reading the occasional 'waxing poetic' in a narrative but when it's every sentence in every paragraph describing the exact same feelings in so many ways one wants to tear out their hair for reading it... the shear volume of verbosity is exhausting to trudge through.
one author in a fandom i follow has the following at the end of each chapter she writes -- what is your opinion of this and what do you do when you see something like this:
"+10 reviews-Update in a week (maybe less if I'm in the mood).
i had heard RK dreams was closed and quite a few people were lamenting about not being able to access the stories that are not on Adamant Eve aka anna-neko's fanfiction.net site-- but through the magic of the 'wayback machine' you can still visit the RK dreams site: