sunny hill, ot5, prompt four
anonymous
June 4 2011, 05:55:12 UTC
where did this come from
"You don't need me on stage," Janghyun had told them, clutching Misung's hands in his own because she was the only one who was worrying at her lip with her front teeth and it did no good to walk on stage with a half-bleeding mouth when even your back-up dancers were in nervous shambles. "You've done it before and you're going to do it again -- all of you," he added after a second's pause that gave Joobi time to pinch the skin of her wrist as if to wake herself up.
"I'm not worried," Sungah told him, gaudy lipstick a wound that made him draw nauseating parallels between her mouth and Joobi's, and he touched at her, too -- at the space where vest-collar met tendons. She shivered a little, and Kota threw her head back to laugh. "You flinched," she told her, touching at the opposite spot and triggering the same response, and the track that they were practicing to skipped a beat, here comes the highlight of the show, the show, the show"I'll be right backstage," he reminded her quietly, and then he smiled,
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Re: sunny hill, ot5, prompt four
anonymous
June 4 2011, 06:03:38 UTC
while i found this a little cluttered with all the extraneous details, i think this was really well-written. and god do i want more janghyun as well ;~; write more sunny hill fic, anon! :3
Re: sunny hill, ot5, prompt four
anonymous
June 4 2011, 06:05:15 UTC
lol i am the reigning queen of extraneous details, anon. /o\ thank you for pointing it out, though, since it's something that i need to work on getting rid of! sobs, you're too kind. :(
fti; jonghun/seunghyun, implied jongki; prompt #3
anonymous
June 4 2011, 05:57:54 UTC
"Take my hand, and I will show you the world."
Seunghyun says it in English, with a thick accent, but without a trace of even the slightest smile on his face that it cracks Jonghun up.
"See, hyung, you still know how to smile," Seunghyun says, grinning, playfully punching the older boy on his shoulder.
The gesture makes Jonghun quirk an eyebrow, as if to say hey, I'm still older than you"Hehe," Seunghyun lowers his head, scratching the back of his head and sporting a sheepish smile. It just makes Jonghun crack up again
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fti/beast, jaejin/dongwoon, prompt #4
anonymous
June 4 2011, 05:58:20 UTC
since i promised an anon earlier to write about jaejin staying at beast's dorm after fti's dorm caught fire. :D started late, though, so it's not much.
something is poking jaejin's cheek. no, correction: someone is poking jaejin's cheek. normally it wouldn't be a big deal, but jaejin's asleep and he really doesn't want to wake up because he's pretty sure that it hasn't been more than five minutes since he fell asleep
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"You don't need me on stage," Janghyun had told them, clutching Misung's hands in his own because she was the only one who was worrying at her lip with her front teeth and it did no good to walk on stage with a half-bleeding mouth when even your back-up dancers were in nervous shambles. "You've done it before and you're going to do it again -- all of you," he added after a second's pause that gave Joobi time to pinch the skin of her wrist as if to wake herself up.
"I'm not worried," Sungah told him, gaudy lipstick a wound that made him draw nauseating parallels between her mouth and Joobi's, and he touched at her, too -- at the space where vest-collar met tendons. She shivered a little, and Kota threw her head back to laugh. "You flinched," she told her, touching at the opposite spot and triggering the same response, and the track that they were practicing to skipped a beat, here comes the highlight of the show, the show, the show"I'll be right backstage," he reminded her quietly, and then he smiled, ( ... )
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Seunghyun says it in English, with a thick accent, but without a trace of even the slightest smile on his face that it cracks Jonghun up.
"See, hyung, you still know how to smile," Seunghyun says, grinning, playfully punching the older boy on his shoulder.
The gesture makes Jonghun quirk an eyebrow, as if to say hey, I'm still older than you"Hehe," Seunghyun lowers his head, scratching the back of his head and sporting a sheepish smile. It just makes Jonghun crack up again ( ... )
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something is poking jaejin's cheek. no, correction: someone is poking jaejin's cheek. normally it wouldn't be a big deal, but jaejin's asleep and he really doesn't want to wake up because he's pretty sure that it hasn't been more than five minutes since he fell asleep ( ... )
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this is too cute with the nose-to-nose (ESKIMO KISS! lmfao) and the half-awake jaejin and dongwoon just being all over him (literally).
:D:D:D:D
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somehow everything turns out ultra cutesy when i attempt 91-line fic, WHAT GIVES. ;~; but i guess that's not always a bad thing, lol.
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keep writing them anon ;~;
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i will try! :D even if i only have the attention span to write the same-ish things a couple of times in a row...
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i love it.
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