fic: the wonder that's keeping the stars apart; eleven/rose

[krazykat_neko]

Note: This is the first fanfic I've written in a year and my first that I've ever written for this fandom but this came to me after I first watched The Big Bang and writing this fic was just a matter of transcribing this little scene in my head. I feel nervous writing for these characters though

Comments

[krazykat_neko]

Thank you! :D

[crazyboutbillie]

You really shouldn't have felt nervous when posting this, it's really wonderful!
You wrote both characters really well (Loved the Tony part!)and Rose's reaction to Eleven was perfect!
Sequel perhaps? ;D

[krazykat_neko]

Thank you! That means a lot, I'm always nervous when I start writing for a new fandom because I'm not entirely sure if I can get the voices right. As for a sequel, I really just pictured this as a one-shot but I wouldn't be opposed to writing more Eleven/Rose. :)

[professor_spork]

This is AWESOME, especially considering that it's your first for Who. I think you've truly captured something here-- Rose's steadfast love and humor; the Doctor's frantic need. Vivid and gorgeous.

“I came here to be reminded of what I’m fighting for. Thank you, Rose Tyler, for reminding me.” He takes her hand and brushes a kiss over the rings and, not without effort, stands up.

That absolutely SCREAMS Eleven to me. Wonderful.

[krazykat_neko]

This whole comment makes me so happy. Thank you! :D

[amberfocus]

I like the idea that he'd go and see Rose at a moment like this. Good fic, excellent story-telling.

[krazykat_neko]

Thank you, I'm really glad you think so. :D

[lizzledpink]

Oh, but... That's so sweet and adorable... <3

[krazykat_neko]

Thank you! I wanted to write a reunion between them without a lot of angst, just kind of showing that they're still connected.