REVISIONS REQUESTEDmagicdraftersDecember 9 2011, 00:41:44 UTC
REVISIONS The mods feel that though your app is strong, some adjustments need to be made. Please address the following points required for clarification: ● We would like to see a bit more detail on the abilities section to give us a better idea of which areas of study or classes he'd exceed in or struggle in aside from those listed. How will the character do in other classes besides herbology and divination? ● An expanded first-person sample will be needed, to better display the character's mannerisms, as well as their inner and outer voices.
Please reply with your revisions as a comment to this comment within 72 hours so that the mods can see the changes made to your app. Thank you!
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The mods feel that though your app is strong, some adjustments need to be made. Please address the following points required for clarification:
● We would like to see a bit more detail on the abilities section to give us a better idea of which areas of study or classes he'd exceed in or struggle in aside from those listed. How will the character do in other classes besides herbology and divination?
● An expanded first-person sample will be needed, to better display the character's mannerisms, as well as their inner and outer voices.
Please reply with your revisions as a comment to this comment within 72 hours so that the mods can see the changes made to your app. Thank you!
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WELCOME TO HOGWARTS!
You have been sorted into SLYTHERIN!
Please follow THESE instructions.
Feel free to introduce yourself on the OOC community before hopping into the game!
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