Well, this can't be good (Keith, Veronica, Logan) WIP

[kristen0912]

Title: Well, this can't be good (WIP)
Author: Kristen
Pairing/Character: Keith, Veronica, Logan (mentions of ensemble)
Word Count: 2039
Rating: G
Summary: The seedier citizens of Neptune have temporarily acquired moral consciousness.
Spoilers: Futurefic, know the whole series
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I am in no way associated with the owners,

Comments

[kou_shun_u]

i like dhow you went the so far original route for her leaving the fbi: failing the psych evaluation.

[flinkkamingo3]

Oooh, this is very promising. And don't worry, the title of your fic does not describe its quality in any way. Can't wait for more!

[love_is_epic]

This is fantastic! I cannot wait to see what happens next! I really, really love how you've painted Veronica here. We rarely ever get to see her vulnerable and get to see her act like a normal college student even less than that. I love that she's opening up to Keith. The whole scene was heartbreaking, but kinda in a good way. I also love that Veronica did a background check on Logan's new girlfriend and even though she never says anything you know she's mentally comparing herself to her and coming up short.

Great job and I'm anxiously awaiting the next part!

[poniesforall]

What a wonderful beginning. I really like seeing Veronica from Keith's point of view. The vulnerability and longing shine through. It would have been nice in canon if they had shown a 3-D version of Veronica.

I really like that she failed her psych review. You have to know that that would have happened, as if she ever would have gotten in the program to begin with. You know, what with the kidnapping suspicion and B&E suspicion and all. Now our girl is going to have to figure out what she'll do now. I'm glad. The FBI wasn't a good fit for her anyway.

[anonymous]

OOOhh ! There are so many things I like about your fic that I don't know where to begin