Week 4: “I don't skate to where the puck is. I skate to where the puck is going to be. "

Jan 04, 2017 19:58

“Excuse me, Miss?" A gentle voice on my right says ( Read more... )

ljidol, week 4

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theun4givables January 5 2017, 01:14:27 UTC
This hits pretty hard in a way that's difficult to describe, but I've also had a pretty emotional day and thank you for this. I enjoyed it quite a lot. :)

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kschlotwrites January 5 2017, 13:08:51 UTC

You're welcome! I'm happy you enjoyed it.

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penpusher January 5 2017, 04:07:27 UTC
What a charming, rich and evocative entry!

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kschlotwrites January 5 2017, 13:09:07 UTC

Thank you!

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adoptedwriter January 5 2017, 21:46:08 UTC
I love this! I miss my grandmas every day! They have sent me "signs", but I will always miss them.

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kschlotwrites January 7 2017, 22:19:31 UTC

Thank you!

For awhile, I was finding dimes in random places. I thought of it as a message from my dad. That's the best thing about these little "signs". They can be completely coincidental, nothing supernatural about them. But if the person who sees believes it was a loved on saying hello, they'll get a warm fuzzy feeling.

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my_name_is_jenn January 5 2017, 21:54:01 UTC
This was beautiful.

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kschlotwrites January 7 2017, 22:20:13 UTC

Thank you!

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rayaso January 7 2017, 00:55:41 UTC
This is such a great tale about niceness. You did a wonderful job with the prompt, turning it into this. I really enjoyed it.

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kschlotwrites January 7 2017, 22:19:57 UTC

Thank you!

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